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stars across twilight sky traveling fast journeying through space a caravan of speedy pilgrims meteors shooting stars

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Date: 12/23/2023 4:25:00 PM
A spacey Ninette, Sara. The imagery was special out in space. Blessings, Bill
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Date: 12/16/2023 12:29:00 PM
A breathtaking Ninette!
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 12/16/2023 6:10:00 PM
thank you kindly! enjoy your weekend, Sara
Date: 12/13/2023 12:29:00 PM
As the twilight sky adorned itself with celestial jewels, swift and luminous, a spectacle of awe dear Sara. A celestial caravan of pilgrims, the meteors, and shooting stars, danced across the heavens. In the forthcoming nights of the 13th and 14th, a mesmerizing phenomenon shall unfold: a celestial shower of stars, an enchanting spectacle not to be missed.
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 12/13/2023 5:30:00 PM
thank you, dearest Sotto, for your visit and for expressing the beauty you saw in my poem. Thanks for telling me about the upcoming celestial shower...I think I may have missed the 13th but will watch for it tomorrow evening. I'm grateful for your ongoing encouragement and kindness, your poetess friend in Texas, Sara
Date: 12/13/2023 12:14:00 PM
A celestially beauteous FAVE, Sara. I love, "a caravan of speedy pilgrims," traveling through the vasty expanse of space. Wonderful! Hugs xx
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 12/13/2023 5:31:00 PM
thank you, Regina, for your kind words and for faving this poem. I'm humbly grateful! Have a splendid evening, hugs, Sara
Date: 12/13/2023 10:35:00 AM
Nice prospective on stars and meteors,
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 12/13/2023 5:31:00 PM
thanks for your visit, Jay, and for your comments. Wishing you a pleasant evening, Sara
Date: 12/13/2023 10:05:00 AM
An amazing sight to see Sara, I remember years ago in the Irish countryside, I was out just looking at the night sky, it was like black velvet with a scattering of diamonds. Then the odd meteor came into view. Space fascinates me. Tom
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 12/13/2023 5:34:00 PM
thanks for visiting and sharing. I once saw a meteor shower with a group of students whom I'd taken up to a mountain outside of El Paso to watch the stars. Even the adolescents became quiet, awestruck...I don't know what was more beautiful--the stars or the wonder and delight in my students' eyes. A profound moment for sure. Have a pleasant evening, Sara
Date: 12/13/2023 9:21:00 AM
A wondrous display indeed. After all is said and done, no one beats God. Love it!
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 12/13/2023 5:31:00 PM
well said, Joe. Thank you! enjoy your evening, Sara

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