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Caviar Dreams

You Were just A poem that i dreamt of on a maple gold caviar smeared dawn as darkness held my quill from bleeding ink i found rare rouge pink orchids Sprout as love from your soft spoken words that linger through riveting riverscapes of moon diamonds.

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Date: 9/15/2024 1:34:00 PM
Descriptive lines penned. I dream of poems that never come to fruition, but they were good dreams anyway. Thanks for sharing this one with us. Sara K
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Date: 10/25/2023 5:26:00 PM
Very beautiful, simply- :)
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Date: 8/18/2023 11:41:00 AM
"""That poem that gleefully at my poor soul Its fevered and frantic verses low singing This darken world owing to take its toll Such images as a only a poet keeps bringing..."""" RJL- A SNIPPET Your caviar dreams is a gem my friend. A definite fav for me. GOD bless.
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Ink Empress
Date: 9/5/2023 11:21:00 AM
Thank you so much for this lovely comment I appreciate your feedback truly
Date: 8/18/2023 9:28:00 AM
Poetry at times takes one away from themselves and to other places they've never dreamt of, yours today did just that. Thank you Empress for the gift! ;)
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Ink Empress
Date: 9/5/2023 11:22:00 AM
You are truly so sweet thank you
Date: 8/18/2023 3:47:00 AM
Such a visual poem Grear
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Ink Empress
Date: 8/18/2023 4:43:00 AM
Thank you so much
Date: 8/17/2023 5:06:00 PM
Empress! Elegance speaks here in your inspired lines! A great read to begin my evening’s reading, please keep the ink of your inspired talent flowing! Bravo! sally, so glad to meet you —
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Date: 8/18/2023 4:43:00 AM
Awwn you are so kind i appreciate you saying that truly thank you so much
Date: 8/17/2023 11:07:00 AM
beautiful, and creative, took me on a visual journey, look forward to more such journeys, dear poet
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Ink Empress
Date: 8/18/2023 4:43:00 AM
Thank u so much truly grateful
Date: 8/17/2023 5:35:00 AM
I agree with Victor. Great imagery. Lucky the object of your affection here
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Ink Empress
Date: 8/18/2023 4:43:00 AM
Awwn kingy u are too kind thank u so much
Date: 8/17/2023 4:07:00 AM
Just mesmerizing! You're quite a gifted poet, Inky:-)
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Ink Empress
Date: 8/18/2023 4:42:00 AM
Thank you so very much truly
Date: 8/17/2023 3:02:00 AM
I was astounded reading this poem, especially its imagery. You compare the sky with a smear of caviar. Incredible imagination.
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Ink Empress
Date: 8/17/2023 3:45:00 AM
This is so kind of you to appreciate thank you so much. Truly
Date: 8/17/2023 2:25:00 AM
Love it! Impressive for sure. God bless you friend. Love, Gina
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Date: 8/17/2023 3:46:00 AM
Awwn bless you beautiful Gina, thank you for dropping by

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