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Caterpillar--Pleiades

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Caterpillar

Crisp the leaf she nibbles Coiling in yellow dress, Cocooned…waiting to bloom. Close to freedom, nights pass Cuddling her lustruos threads… Chrysalis, queen of frills Changed as a butterfly! 11/22/2015 Pleiades, Please for Kim Merryman ........... Syllable count checked at www.howmanysyllables.com

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Teddy Kimathi

Date: 12/1/2015 6:54:00 AM

A beautiful picture of a metamorphosis! Your verse created a film in my mind... Congrats for your WIN in the contest nette! ;-)

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 11/30/2015 3:17:00 AM

Congrats nette.. very wonderful write n win!

Sandra Haight

Date: 11/29/2015 8:30:00 AM

Amazing Pleiades, Nette, and filled with great imagery. Congratulations on your fine win. Hugs, Sandra

Eve Roper

Date: 11/28/2015 4:14:00 PM

Good write, Nette, and congratulations on your win!

Skat A

Date: 11/28/2015 3:26:00 PM

Nette, Congrats on your fine win, SKAT LOVE

Lin Lane

Date: 11/28/2015 7:20:00 AM

Well done, Nette... congratulations.

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores

Date: 11/28/2015 5:20:00 AM

Congratulations Nette

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 11/27/2015 6:27:00 PM

A beautiful piece and wonderful win! Congratulations!

Abdul Malik

Date: 11/27/2015 5:01:00 PM

Very nice.

Jan Allison

Date: 11/27/2015 4:59:00 PM

Dropping back with my congrats:-) hugs Jan xx

Kim Merryman

Date: 11/27/2015 3:29:00 PM

Nette, I loved the descriptiveness on this and how the lines flowed together so well! Congrats on your win and for learning a new poetry form! Love, Kim

Paul Callus

Date: 11/26/2015 1:46:00 PM

You tackled a unique topic and produced a delightful Pleiades, Nette! This should now transform into a lovely win:) Hugs // paul

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 11/24/2015 1:55:00 AM

Wonderful, Nette...I love butterflies! Hugs, Rhonda

Matthew Anish

Date: 11/23/2015 9:24:00 PM

Recently sold an article about Butterflies. You paint a nice word portrait of this incredible animal. Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/23/2015 2:56:00 PM

Ahh!!!..Good one for the contest..Those caterpillars surely do have voracious appetites..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Duke Beaufort

Date: 11/22/2015 12:34:00 PM

Nette, just an example of a great natural transformation that is an incredible show. I c what you have done. Homage paid to the lovely seven sisters in the heavens.

Jan Allison

Date: 11/22/2015 10:58:00 AM

Absolutely beautiful Nette such a clever poem good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx

Gabby Sabre

Date: 11/22/2015 10:54:00 AM

Visually perfect, reaches out to fly into my screen and beyond your poetry of life and nature!

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 11/22/2015 9:26:00 AM

What a natural beauty!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/22/2015 7:35:00 AM

- Natural beauty, is a great poem Nette !!! - Good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Norma Arana

Date: 11/22/2015 7:19:00 AM

Your unique topic, your mood created quite a lovely emotion in me. Fluent words glide from a poet master like you!

Jill Spagnola

Date: 11/22/2015 7:08:00 AM

This is awesome Nette! If I had read it first I would not have entered mine!!Solid 7...:), jill

Tim Smith

Date: 11/22/2015 6:39:00 AM

Wow nette...love this one

CayCay Jennings

Date: 11/22/2015 6:38:00 AM

Awesome - I haven't read about the contest, but the poem is already a winner to me ... CayCay