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Castles In the Sky

There were days of youth, building castles in the sky, cool green grass, an old shade tree, my secret place. Clouds drifting by on summer breeze were my pallet, childish imagination the brush, a blue sky for canvas. Great walls rise in white and gray blue block, towers tall stack as breeze lifts them to heights. Gates open and close, to my whim and delight, earth below, my kingdom, spreads forever wide. I would float softly above the toil of earth below, my young dreams of freedom to roam the sky. Dragons soar in majestic grace, to my command, to watch them rise and fall in cloud bare space. At times skies will darken, gates are drawn, rumbles of war drums would announce the fight. With lightning’s flash came wars wind and rain, to come the rainbow, a pact of peace promised. Older now, still building castles in the sky, I’m yet the mighty king floating from on high. cool green grass, an old shade tree looking up, holding hands with my queen, in our secret place. Robert Gene Stoner Jr © 8/4/16

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Date: 1/4/2017 6:27:00 PM
Congratulations on your fine win, Robert. We must never stop building our castles in the sky! Well done! Sandra
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Date: 1/4/2017 2:35:00 PM
Very nice! Congratulations :)
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Robert Stoner Jr
Date: 1/4/2017 5:22:00 PM
Thank you Heidi for the read and positive feed back on this piece, much appreciated.
Date: 1/4/2017 2:13:00 PM
Congrats well done great poem x
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Robert Stoner Jr
Date: 1/4/2017 5:21:00 PM
Thanks Wendy for the read and praise on this effort.
Date: 1/4/2017 7:54:00 AM
Congratulations on your win, Robert, hugs Eve
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Robert Stoner Jr
Date: 1/4/2017 5:21:00 PM
Thanks Eve for the read and visit of congratulations much appreciated.
Date: 1/4/2017 2:29:00 AM
Good king too and a very thoughtful poem. Good luck for you and the Queen. Congratulations and wishes, Kai
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Robert Stoner Jr
Date: 1/4/2017 5:20:00 PM
Thanks for the read and supportive comment Kai, the Queen approves.
Date: 1/3/2017 4:34:00 PM
Great poem. I'm glad that us poets don't give up our sky castles as we get older. Congrats! :-)
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Robert Stoner Jr
Date: 1/4/2017 5:19:00 PM
Guess I hold on long as I can, and who says I'm an old guy, lol. Thanks for the read Mark.
Date: 10/25/2016 5:24:00 PM
Nice one!
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Robert Stoner Jr
Date: 10/25/2016 5:41:00 PM
Thanks for the read Heidi and praise, much appreciated.

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