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Castles In the Sand - Collaboration With Claudia Polydoro

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Fog rises, mist clouds thoughts, Logic fails, reasoning in disarray Internal terror permeates the day It's inner peace I seek to find I created a safe haven Where I can go to when I must Whenever the world gets too loud. I have my castle in the sand Where I can finally let down Walls, meticulously built around My thoughts, myself, my heart Where I can be who I can't be outside Just castle walls remain, cool against my back, warm in sunlight soft, gentle around my trembling self, stern against the world outside Sharing it's strength with me Empowering me to dare Giving me the peace I need Freeing me from my own self *** January 29. 2017 Claudia Polydoro Darren White

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Date: 1/30/2017 7:28:00 AM
A great collab guys! Loved it!
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Claudia Polydoro
Date: 1/31/2017 7:48:00 AM
Thank you, Budgie! :D
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Darren White
Date: 1/30/2017 7:31:00 AM
Thanks Budge :)
Date: 1/29/2017 6:47:00 PM
A lovely safe haven!
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Darren White
Date: 1/29/2017 11:11:00 PM
It is!, Thank you Kim :)
Date: 1/29/2017 5:48:00 PM
So beautiful and uplifting - a wonderful collaboration Claudia and Darren:-) hugs Jan xx7
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Darren White
Date: 1/29/2017 11:11:00 PM
Thanks Jan, happy you like it! HUGS
Date: 1/29/2017 2:36:00 PM
Love what you two did...I need one
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Claudia Polydoro
Date: 1/29/2017 3:13:00 PM
Yes, Tim... join us :)
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Darren White
Date: 1/29/2017 2:38:00 PM
Come join us Tim :)
Date: 1/29/2017 1:30:00 PM
I loved writing it with you, my friend... i think we did good - hehehe :) <3
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Darren White
Date: 1/29/2017 1:46:00 PM
We sure did, Clau <3 :)

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