Carved

I carved out a line
Through the gridlock streets
Where lovers embrace
And the highclass meet

Where the gamers trudge
Always looking down
All the elders look on
With a steady frown

Fresh stores opened
Old ones closed
The city's on the rise
Everybody knows

Tell that to the ragged
Huddled round the alleys
Skyscrapers children
In concrete valleys

In the center of it all
Pouring out his heart
Is a man on a piano
Who knows nothing of art

He's been there for hours
Days and now weeks
He's not going to stop playing
Until the summer sleeps

When winter strangles this city
The streets will be silent
The drapes of snow
Soothing yet violent

I wonder where the player
Will go when its over
Will he slumber with summer?
Or change with winter.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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October 20, 2016 at 9:10 PM
I liked it, especially "drapes of snow, soothing yet violent."
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September 26, 2016 at 3:18 PM
Moregan, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT
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September 21, 2016 at 8:32 PM
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September 21, 2016 at 7:27 AM
Good entry with a nice poem. Hope u will enjoy PS very much.Very meaningful & deep write. Keep on writing..........//:) with love
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