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Can You Hear Me

Mi Amor, Can you hear me? Can you hear me in the silence as I call your name at night? Can you hear me? Can you feel me, Papi? Can you feel me in the soft wind filtering through the blinds? Can you feel me? Can you feel me? Can you feel me in the soft breeze lightly brush against your face While on the court, you play? Can you feel me? Can you feel me, love? Can you feel me deep in the night as I lay bare beside you, Soft and warm? Can you feel me, baby? I am in the silence of your nights The mild wind which encircles you at each move you make I am in the warmth of the noon day sun that floods your veins And colors brown, your skin I am in the soft wind planting kisses on your handsome, face. I am your love that lays beside you in the pockets of your mind In dreams we weave, we lay together 'til Luna beckons the sun And soon time comes when this love will no longer be denied A time when we'll gaze with misty eyes and subtle smiles A time when no words need arise from the depth of souls When the taste of soft, warm and supple lips trembling Cause racing hearts to sing the words only we understand For you will be finally, here! To hold me, enfold me; To lay beside me Behind me Within me Beneath me! Dream, baby, dream... Tomorrow, rides fast into reality ~*~ Espera a nuestro sueño **. Te quiero, mi amor** 2009

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Date: 3/14/2010 9:14:00 AM
This is so lovely Audrey, written from a yearning heart for a lucky guy >> and a tinge of Spanish is like icing on the cake >> James
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Date: 3/13/2010 8:45:00 AM
Good morning Audrey, To have a love that can be so profound is truly something to treasure through out your life time with someone who has become one with you, this is absolutely beautiful thank you for sharing it with all of us here in the poetry community because I thoroughly enjoyed my visit with you today. PS: your e-mail didn't come through Please resend. God bless you always Dean
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Date: 3/12/2010 6:13:00 PM
Now write the music. This sounds like a very beautiful love song. it is such a pleasure to read Audrey. Well done. Thanks for your comments today, no one has called me Maggie since I left Scotland over forty years ago, my eldest brother called me nothing else. thanks for the memory...love Maggie :)
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Date: 3/12/2010 3:59:00 PM
Though Ron is sharp as they come ... poetry eludes him ..but I do speak my written words to him at intimate moments and he just keeps smiling.. I think he thinks I an alien...hahaha... just joking.. he is overwhelmed at times by this writing talent... us women have our little secret weapons now...don't we BBF...luv.. Linda-Marie
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Date: 3/12/2010 3:20:00 PM
So lovely .... so romantic ... so passionate ... so expressive ... so emotional ...so beautiful ... so elegant ... so wonderful .. so loving.. so ... so... so ..intense.. I am breathless reading it my BBF ... must send it to my favs... now go read my luv poems posted today and see how much we truly are BBF's ... same wave length..luv.. Linda-Marie
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Date: 3/12/2010 8:12:00 AM
This is a song lyric. That's what it is. Put a 12 string acoustic and a couple of restrained horns behind this and you might very well be on the veranda down Argentina way under the full moon. It would be very easy to put thgis to something. Perhaps you have a hidden talent along with your obvious ones? Thank you as wlways. You are very kind! Regards, Gerard.
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Date: 3/12/2010 6:01:00 AM
enjoyed reading today!
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Date: 3/11/2010 8:27:00 AM
Eso es extraordinario, Audrey. Did not know that you are also speaking Spnish. A very romantic write full with passion. Thank you for your war comments...Keep your pen flowing! Love, Gert
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Date: 3/11/2010 4:51:00 AM
Audrey, this is one of the most beautiful love poems that I have every read. It is full of unspoken passion, emotional connections, and faithfulness to your love...for better or worse. It is absolutely beautiful. Love on the wings of the wind. Lovingly, Dane Ann
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Date: 3/11/2010 4:23:00 AM
Very romantic and passionate write..Keep the creative pen flowing..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara
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Date: 3/10/2010 10:26:00 PM
Sí, lo quiero, mucho, Jessica!
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Date: 3/10/2010 9:51:00 PM
que felizidad para sentir tanto amor por uno no? sorry i can't spell spanish well nice poem (:
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Date: 3/10/2010 9:50:00 PM
Very beautiful Audrey....Love this...Marty
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