Can of Snuff

Valentine's Day is a thing of the past
This thing called love will never last
I bought you a can of snuff
You walked away in a huff
And now I wearing my arm in a cast
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Pettit Avatar
February 6, 2011 at 4:49 PM
Congratulations on your win in the contest. This is a well written limerick.
Devonshire Avatar
January 29, 2011 at 6:51 PM
Your sense of humor kills me, Larry. Congratulations on a well-deserved first place win. Love, Carolyn
Guzzi Avatar
January 27, 2011 at 4:39 PM
you betcha! snuff boy LOL, I'll never forget getting a FOOTBATH! geeeez do my feet stink? what do men think? of don't they! LOL good WIN here very funny! Light & Love
Fraser Avatar
January 27, 2011 at 1:43 PM
Ouchy Larry, congrats on your win in Francine's contest....:)
Brown Avatar
January 27, 2011 at 9:25 AM
Congratulations Larry on your win in Francines's contest "Valentine's Day Limerick". Love, Carol
George   Avatar
January 26, 2011 at 3:46 PM
Goodd one, Larry. Congrat's on your big win. Lainie
Freeman Avatar
January 26, 2011 at 8:33 AM
Congratulations Larry, Good to see a good man a the top. Agape, Moses
Calhoun Avatar
January 26, 2011 at 7:59 AM
Hi Larry - Congratulations on your BIG WIN in Francine's contest. Best wishes, KC
Pettit Avatar
January 26, 2011 at 1:25 AM
You entered this poem as a change of pace. Your entry didn't just take up space. This writing made a scene being a favorite of Francine Congratulations on winning first place.
Johnson Avatar
January 25, 2011 at 9:53 PM
Congratulations on your big win with funny one. Love, Joyce
Dietrich Avatar
January 25, 2011 at 9:40 PM
haha, A can of snuff. Oh boy!! Congats on your TOP WIN, Larry.LUv, Andrea
Mehta Avatar
January 25, 2011 at 7:08 PM
Congratulations on the first place win in the contest, Larry
Richards Avatar
January 25, 2011 at 6:33 PM
So funny!! Perhaps you got what you deserved!!! :) ???
Sweetheart Avatar
January 25, 2011 at 5:53 PM
Congrats Larry on your first place win in the Valentine Day contest with this awesome entry my friend.. enjoy your chart topper with luv..
Roberts Avatar
January 25, 2011 at 5:46 PM
congrats on your first place win in the Valentines day contest Larry, thank you for supporting it
Brown Avatar
January 25, 2011 at 8:55 AM
Enjoyed reading your poetry today Larry. I hope you are having a wonderful week. Love, Carol
Taylor Avatar
January 24, 2011 at 8:12 PM
Excellent entry, my friend. Great chuckle. Good luck. Ralph
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