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Call Me Summer

You can call me “Summer” in this rhyme. I hibernate until my special time, and when I come the weather is so fine. Most people say that I am just sublime. How wonderful to be a summer’s day with daisy flowers blooming all array children laughing so delightful as they play. I am happy with things happening this way. Contentment is my care at my day’s eve. My dreams from all the day I do retrieve and softly sigh a warm breeze as I breathe to make the human beings feel relieved. I’m happy just to be a summer’s night with full moon shinning on the water bright as I watch two lovers in romantic plight and a galaxy of stars is in my sight. 6/15/20

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Date: 7/2/2023 4:07:00 PM
What a wonderful perspective Janis - so creative. Love hearing from a "summer day!" Congratulations on your win! Blessings on your summer days.
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Date: 7/2/2023 4:05:00 PM
What a wonderful perspective Janis - so creative. Love hearing from a "summer day!" Congratulations on your win! Blessings on your summer days.
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Date: 7/7/2020 1:47:00 PM
A lovely write on summer Janis. Loved the metaphors. Congratulations on your win :)
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Date: 7/6/2020 1:51:00 PM
Nice write Janis, congrats on placing this time!
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Date: 7/5/2020 5:22:00 AM
I really love your poem Janis. You're my favourite here. I am currently working on my first book. Therefore seeking a help. Can we break grammar rules in writing? I have seen many beautiful writes including yours, where rules are broken and this makes it most alluring. But do audiences bear it for a new poetess like me? I will be delighted if you response and help me. Thank you.
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Date: 7/6/2020 10:53:00 PM
Grammar rules should not be broken in writing. Spelling, subject verb agreement especially. Can you give me an example of a write of mine where a rule is broken? If so, it is a word order structure which will fall under poetic license. I hope this helps. If you give me an example of what you speak I can address it.
Date: 6/20/2020 8:47:00 AM
I enjoyed your poem.
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Date: 6/20/2020 8:46:00 AM
Hello JaninsThompson, I like the way you created this poem. Enjoy your day my friend.
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Date: 6/20/2020 8:45:00 AM
Hello JaninsThompson, I like the way you created this poem. Enjoy your day my friend.
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Date: 6/16/2020 5:20:00 PM
Hello Janis Thompson , I enjoyed to read this poem of summer. Enjoy your evening my firend.
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