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on losing our best friend, Darryl, in February 2014 ever so suddenly ever so tragically - always in our heart

call 9-1-1 was all he said ~ final parting words posted on November 9, 2018

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Date: 11/15/2018 5:26:00 AM
My condolences Line...lovely senryu my friend...or should I say 'senryuLine'...love & light...^WW^
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Date: 11/15/2018 9:15:00 PM
Thank you so much, WW. Most appreciated.
Date: 11/12/2018 5:14:00 PM
Sorry for your loss and his family's loss, Line.
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Date: 11/15/2018 9:18:00 PM
Thanks, Andrea. Hard to believe it's been 13.5 years. Unfortunately, angels do get called back to heaven... way before we are ready to let them go.
Date: 11/12/2018 5:06:00 PM
I am sorry for your loss, Line. Your brief poem captures the sadness well
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Date: 11/15/2018 9:18:00 PM
Thank you so much, Agnes. The finality of it all never quite heals right.
Date: 11/12/2018 4:08:00 PM
Line, so much sorrow in a few words, well done ~
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Date: 11/15/2018 9:19:00 PM
Thank you so much, Constance. Most appreciated.
Date: 11/12/2018 10:01:00 AM
Sad. I know that you still miss him. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara
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Date: 11/12/2018 10:58:00 AM
Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Sara.
Date: 11/12/2018 8:00:00 AM
Sad, well-expressed, Line. Janice
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Date: 11/12/2018 8:44:00 AM
Thanks for your visit and comment, Janice.
Date: 11/11/2018 6:05:00 PM
I'm am sorry to hear of his passing away. He will be missed, Thank you for sharing with us.
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Date: 11/11/2018 7:03:00 PM
Thanks for your visit and kind words, Pixie.
Date: 11/11/2018 3:20:00 PM
Oh this is so sad, Line, yet so powerful. to those that read it.
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Date: 11/11/2018 4:35:00 PM
Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Harry.
Date: 11/10/2018 5:44:00 PM
So sad that those were his only parting words.
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Date: 11/10/2018 6:20:00 PM
Subject for another senryu no doubt... but his only words afterwards were in fact "Tell my family I love them"... then a few barely audible answers to the paramedics. The minute they stood him up to get him on the stretcher, he passed out.
Date: 11/10/2018 7:57:00 AM
I'm so sorry Line, but I find it helps to share and talk or write about it. Losing a close friend or relative is really sad. We have all gone through the same sadness no doubt, but that doesn't make it any easier for you. One of my sons friend's mother was strangled to death and all for a TV that was stolen! Thoughts and prayers with you. Jennifer.
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Date: 11/10/2018 5:05:00 PM
So hard to deal with senseless tragedies. You are so right that we have to find ways of processing so we don't go insane.
Date: 11/9/2018 11:38:00 PM
I am so sorry for your loss. You are right, he will always remain in your heart. It is tragic when someone dies unexpectedly. Many healing hugs along the wind. ~ Brandy
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Date: 11/10/2018 6:14:00 AM
What a lovely message, Brandy. Thanks you so much.
Date: 11/9/2018 9:32:00 PM
as she threw the pistol into the raging sea beneath their balcony
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Date: 11/9/2018 10:07:00 PM
I like where you took this, Timothy. LOL
Date: 11/9/2018 5:05:00 PM
So sad
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Date: 11/9/2018 10:07:00 PM
Thanks for your most appreciated visit and comment, Mike.
Date: 11/9/2018 3:22:00 PM
Line, I am without words, but sending you love.
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Date: 11/9/2018 3:46:00 PM
This refers to an older event as traumatising as it was... our best friend was at our place enjoying a Friday night until those very sobering words... the ambulance took him away and told us to expect the worst and sure enough the hospital barely kept him alive until his family flew in and our dear friend died of a brain anurism. It was heartbreaking.
Date: 11/9/2018 2:54:00 PM
so sad - especially as this was true
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Date: 11/9/2018 3:49:00 PM
Thank you so much, Jack, for your much appreciated visit and comment.
Date: 11/9/2018 12:05:00 PM
You will always remember these last words, Line. I'm so sorry for your loss. What a beautiful senryu! Hugs, Carolyn
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Date: 11/9/2018 3:48:00 PM
Absolutely, Carolyn. Thank you so much for your lovely visit and comment.
Date: 11/9/2018 11:54:00 AM
oh it's such a tragedy when someone passes so unexpectedly, he will always be in your thoughts Line:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 11/9/2018 3:48:00 PM
Yes absolutely. Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Jan.

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