Caged

Canary held captive, unable to sing the song of the free Always yearning to take to the sky. Gone are the days it flew from tree to tree, Excitedly singing from branches on high; Devoid of joy, its song is but a sigh 9-22-2023

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Susan Ashley

Date: 10/9/2023 7:12:00 PM

Dear Joseph, your poignant pen shines in this moving piece as does the beauty of your empathy. Congratulations for your excellent win in Andrea’s contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 10/9/2023 7:14:00 AM

"...its song is but a sigh..." wowza. Melancholy write Joseph. Congratulations! :)

Christuraj Alex

Date: 10/9/2023 2:02:00 AM

Very beautiful Quincrosticain. In fact, I never knew about this form. After seeing yours, I am inspired. Congratulations!

Janice Canerdy

Date: 10/8/2023 7:24:00 PM

Joseph, a big CONGRATS on your win with this deeply moving poem. Janice

Joanna Daniel

Date: 10/8/2023 6:36:00 PM

A sad tone in this poem with a great message, Joseph, congratulations:)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/28/2023 3:03:00 PM

So sad. Birds as well as people can be as slaves

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 9/26/2023 8:51:00 AM

Some birds can be caged provided it is big enough to feel some freedom And they should be well fed. However real freedom is always to be preferred.

Brandy Nicole

Date: 9/24/2023 7:16:00 PM

In this instance, being in a cage means there's no freedom. So sad, indeed. This is tender and emotional, all at the same time. My best to you, Joseph. Hugs, Brandy