Cafe News

I was at my neighbourhood café
Come to hide and read quietly
As I so often love to do
In my favourite little corner

My latte was especially smooth
My story particularly captivating
How better to relax on a lazy afternoon

Life couldn’t be better that is
Until a shriek tore through
So high pitch it woke the dead

I jumped out of my skin
fearing the worst
Looked around on high alert

Met countless pairs of wide eyes
Staring back in bewilderment
Tallying the many near-miss heart attack victims
And there they were… the culprits

Two giggly grown women
Sitting out like sore thumbs
Totally oblivious to the commotion they had triggered

In a world of their very own
But not being too quiet about it all
Just when I presumed it might be safe
To return to my quiet nook and haven
And ease back into the literary world awaiting

Loud enough for all to hear
It was made known to everyone
Soon there would be another new young mother on this earth
Ahh…
Someone was about to earn her wings 



AP: Honorable Mention 2026, Honorable Mention 2026

Submitted on September 12, 2017 for contest POEMS THAT PAINT A PICTURE sponsored by SILENT ONE  -  RANKED 2ND
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Ashley Avatar
September 13, 2017 at 7:49 PM
Congratulations Line on your win with this excellent poem! :)
Gauthier Avatar
September 14, 2017 at 10:44 AM
Hi Susan, thank you for your comment. Have a wonderful day!
La France Avatar
September 13, 2017 at 9:13 AM
Line, CONGRATULATIONS on your placement with this wonderful poem
Gauthier Avatar
September 14, 2017 at 10:43 AM
Thank you so much for your lovely comment.
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September 13, 2017 at 6:28 AM
An interesting take on the contest.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
Gauthier Avatar
September 13, 2017 at 9:17 AM
Thank you - that was a fun contest.
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