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By the Pond

A pond stretches its loop where ripples curl between my toes; and a festoon of red blooms huddle on its bent slope , weaving through the rim of Nowra Park. The nimble tap of spring grazes my face as I wiggle my palms to relish this morning draped in pristine streams-- joyously alone-- bearing my pond's first glow before a crowd whisks by. Carly Lalion Sense Of Touch, a nette onclaud Contest 30 Aug 2015

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Date: 9/8/2015 9:09:00 AM
Carly, Congrats on your sense of touch win. **SKAT**
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Date: 9/7/2015 9:00:00 PM
very beautiful, Carly. BIG congrats on your well deserved win.
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Date: 9/7/2015 9:22:00 AM
Beautiful write.
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Date: 9/6/2015 7:46:00 PM
Fabulous write, Carly, congratulations on your win a 7! Hugs Eve
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Date: 9/6/2015 12:12:00 PM
the brush of your pen spills on this pond, carly... thanks for supporting my contest and big congrats to you!
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Date: 9/6/2015 7:47:00 AM
Wow Carly amazingly beautiful is this write! Congrats on superb win!
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Date: 9/3/2015 10:03:00 AM
The title is a lil bit usual however your content is breathtakingly stunning!!you filled all my senses~ ~Olive Eloisa =')
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Date: 8/30/2015 10:15:00 AM
Absolutely beautiful - good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 8/30/2015 10:04:00 AM
Beautifully descriptive - I'm right there! ;)
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