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Butterfly Girl

She grew up in the forest She has grown with the trees This butterfly girl Oh my eyes do please With her long golden hair Complexion of fair Her body so shaped I'm in delightful stare I sit in awe As she raises her hands Within moments of this Many butterflies land Yellows, whites Blacks with blues In her growing surroundings Around her they flew This girl so beautiful In her forest she shares Many beauties of delight No wonder i stare http://www.thehighlanderspoems.com/fantasy-9.php

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 3/26/2010 12:14:00 PM
Thanks for the poem. Nice
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Date: 3/25/2010 12:20:00 PM
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Date: 3/21/2010 2:45:00 AM
Great poem. Nice picture- and then what happened...
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Date: 3/20/2010 3:36:00 PM
I love butterflies, James!! I could watch them all day-if I had the time. They are all beautiful to me...Peace, love, Audrey
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Date: 3/18/2010 5:49:00 PM
Great descriptive write..Keep the gifted pen flowing. Sara
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Date: 3/18/2010 7:29:00 AM
A very pretty picture painted of this goldilocks! LUv, Andrea
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Date: 3/18/2010 2:46:00 AM
Reading your poetry today, James, has been a pleasure. What an awesome experience to see such a sight. I remember once in the Okefenokee swamp a butterfly landed on one of my daughter's fingers. It stayed and let us pass it around before flying off...a greeting to us,,,that brought smiles. Thank you for sharing your words. Keep writing. And thank you for your comments on my poetry as well. Have a super Day! Lovingly, Dane Ann
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Date: 3/17/2010 10:02:00 PM
Nice fantasy, James. Great write with great imagery. Thanks for sharing and thank you for your comments on mine today. Looks like you have been busy writing, haven't you! Best wishes, Caroline.
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Date: 3/17/2010 5:57:00 PM
Truly is a fantasy..I enjoyed the read...
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Date: 3/17/2010 5:13:00 PM
Colorful image of the butterflies leaving the golden girl's hands, Highlander. I love this fantasy! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/17/2010 4:51:00 PM
Lovely and creative James ... wonderful words to drink in.. thankxxx for your congrats.. always a pleasure sharing the stage with u...luv.. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 3/17/2010 4:50:00 PM
pretty descriptions, enjoyed reading today.
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