Richard Lamoureux Poet Free verse

Butterfly Dreams

I look through my prism
Still I can not see
All of your vibrant colours

I wish for the beauty of a sunrise
To see the brilliance of flowers blooming
Bright blue sky and emerald waters
The colours of fall leaves
I want a rainbow symphony
To hear and see your complete majesty
For my eyes to dance with your flitting wings

The magnificence of you 
is isolated behind a wall of dark grey
A protective layer of granite
Cold to the touch
Unyielding 

I chip
searching for cracks
I tap out a cryptic message
Hoping you will understand
You guide me to the entry way
past the sentinels
Down the corridors
To your banquet hall
Where now I celebrate
Marvel at the brilliance of you
I see
I hear
I feel
Each colourful note

My prism 
had been inadequate to the task
Your wings spread across my imagination
Oh so many vivid colours
Colours a rainbow can't possibly articulate 
Other butterflies would look anemic next to your splendour
Diamonds would lack clarity and brilliance
As I gaze at your form
I try to comprehend
the magnificence of you
I marvel at perfection
You light upon my shoulder
and give me butterfly kisses
My heart is overjoyed 
for in that moment I have 
a glimpse of paradise!




SKAT's butterfly Contest.

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Jennifer Griffith February 6, 2016 at 9:44 AM You are truly amazing writer. This was so beautiful!

Beautiful Scars December 21, 2015 at 12:00 PM Great job! "Colours a rainbow can't possibly articulate Other butterflies would look anemic next to your splendour".My favorite verse..*smiles* -luloo Richard Lamoureux December 22, 2015 at 8:56 AM Thanks again Laura Loo.

Jerry T Curtis December 20, 2015 at 6:27 PM Congratulations Rich, on receiving top spot, on a well developed piece and I hope such a person exist in your life Richard Lamoureux December 20, 2015 at 6:50 PM Thanks Jerry, the answer is yes I do.

Noel Villarosa December 20, 2015 at 12:33 AM Congratulations on your big win, Richard. A captivating imagery. (^_^) Richard Lamoureux December 20, 2015 at 6:50 PM Thanks Noel.

Curtis Johnson December 19, 2015 at 10:37 AM Hi Richard. I felt this and followed you with the butterfly. I love the imagination and the comparisons of beauty vs. beauty. Butterfly wins!. Blessings. Curtis. Richard Lamoureux December 19, 2015 at 12:05 PM What a great comment, thanks!

CayCay Godwin December 19, 2015 at 10:22 AM A colorful and captivating read, Richard. Congratulations on your deserved win ... CayCay Richard Lamoureux December 19, 2015 at 12:05 PM Thanks Cay Cay.

James Fraser December 19, 2015 at 9:54 AM Wow Richard, it's so easy reading the above and seeing why your terrific poem was given the rating it received. I'll write it again, WOW. To my favs :) Many many congratulations. Wishing you and yours a lovely Merry Christmas ~ Olive and James :) Richard Lamoureux December 19, 2015 at 10:04 AM Thanks to you and I hope the two of you have a wonderful Christmas.

Scott Williams December 19, 2015 at 2:37 AM Well done, Richard. Congrats on your 1st place win. Richard Lamoureux December 19, 2015 at 8:20 AM Thanks Scott.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma December 18, 2015 at 10:31 PM This is so so beautiful Richard.. no wonder a first place win!! Big congrats! Richard Lamoureux December 19, 2015 at 8:20 AM You are kind, thanks Upma

James Inman December 18, 2015 at 9:00 PM Great write Richard. Richard Lamoureux December 19, 2015 at 8:19 AM Thanks James.

Dan Cwiak December 18, 2015 at 6:14 PM Wonderful write here, Richard. I love the way you bring different perspectives together to make a point! Well deserved #1. Richard Lamoureux December 19, 2015 at 8:19 AM Thanks Dan.

Andrea Dietrich December 18, 2015 at 4:26 PM Love your stunning metaphor. A well deserved win and Congratulations. Richard Lamoureux December 19, 2015 at 8:15 AM Thanks Andrea.;0)

Joe Maverick December 18, 2015 at 2:24 PM Well penned Richard, and a worthy winner all the best.' Richard Lamoureux December 19, 2015 at 8:14 AM Thanks Joe.

Rob Carmack December 18, 2015 at 11:18 AM Congrats Richard on taking first place. Have a Merry Christmas. God Bless. Richard Lamoureux December 19, 2015 at 8:13 AM Hi Rob, thanks for the visit.

Michael Tor December 18, 2015 at 10:53 AM Richard what a splendid write. Love the imagery and theme. Congratulations on a cleverly written write. Also for your 1st placement in this Contest. I want to wish you and your mom and loved ones a warm and joyous Christmas... Richard Lamoureux December 19, 2015 at 8:12 AM Thanks Michael, much appreciated.

John Hamilton December 18, 2015 at 6:30 AM Wow Richard stunning piece of work, congrats well deserved no 1! Richard Lamoureux December 18, 2015 at 10:01 AM Thanks John, I still have to make time to view the other entries. Time is at such a premium this time of year.

Poet Destroyer A December 18, 2015 at 1:24 AM Richard, Congratulations on your wonderful butterfly win. A sweet glimpse of paradise. Luv ~LINDA~ Richard Lamoureux December 18, 2015 at 2:31 AM Hi Linda, thanks for the kind comment. Merry Christmas. Richard Lamoureux December 18, 2015 at 2:30 AM Thanks Viv, much appreciated.

Viv Wigley December 18, 2015 at 12:07 AM A suitably delicate piece and a worthy win, Richard. jolly well done! Regards, Viv Richard Lamoureux December 18, 2015 at 12:55 AM Thanks Viv, much appreciated.

Eileen Manassian December 17, 2015 at 11:08 PM I can't tell you how proud I am of you, my Guardian Poet. To see your name in that first place slot brought me lots and lots of joy. Congrats, my dear. This is a deserving piece.....Hugs Richard Lamoureux December 18, 2015 at 12:54 AM Thanks Eileen as does your comment bring me joy. Hugs Rick.

Sandra Haight December 17, 2015 at 8:20 PM Way to go, Richard! Simply beautiful! Congrats on your First Place win! Sandra Richard Lamoureux December 17, 2015 at 10:23 PM Thanks Sandra, it was a nice surprise.

Richard D Seal December 17, 2015 at 7:27 PM Gotta be one of your best Rick, it's left me with butterflies before my eyes. Big congrats for this fine write. Take care, Richard Richard Lamoureux December 17, 2015 at 7:35 PM Thanks Richard, much appreciated!

Skat A December 17, 2015 at 7:10 PM WOW, Richard, I'm impressed, I guess men can write about any given theme. Thank you for supporting my contest. It was a delight to host. I'm still smiling after reading and closing and posting my new blog. Congratulations on your AWESOME WIN... Stop by my latest Blog "I GUESS THEY CAN... HOW ABOUT IT LADIES???" help celebrate and tell me why you decided to join THIS contest. Looking forward in hearing from you. Love SKAT Richard Lamoureux December 17, 2015 at 7:36 PM Wow, thanks for the first place. What a lovely way to start my evening. Hugs Rick.

Carol Eastman December 17, 2015 at 11:28 AM Well said! You should do good in the contest.. Merry Christmas from my family to yours. Richard Lamoureux December 17, 2015 at 7:38 PM Thanks Carol, it did do well. I appreciate the vote of confidence.

Eileen Manassian December 16, 2015 at 4:03 PM Richard.....I have no words for this splendid write. You need to work on a second book....hugs Richard Lamoureux December 16, 2015 at 5:39 PM I have a few ideas. Thanks for the encouragement!

Connie Marcum Wong December 15, 2015 at 7:38 PM This is simply enchanting Richard. I love butterfly kisses. I taught my little granddaughter how and she delights in giving and receiving them. Richard Lamoureux December 16, 2015 at 9:23 AM Thanks Connie, kids are adorable.

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