Butterfly

She was delicate
as a butterfly wing,
intense black hair 
rolling down her back,
dense dark eyes,
a shaping of the lips 
for the necessary vowels 
hinting at other possibilities,
a webbing of cerulean veins
barely hidden beneath 
porcelain-thin skin.
She was beauty,
an angel of the second order.
I wish I could recall her name.

For "True Beauty" contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Jones Avatar
March 20, 2013 at 6:21 PM
Congratulations on a wonderful win Jack..Donna
Jordan Avatar
March 20, 2013 at 7:34 PM
Thanks, Donna. It was a real surprise. Jack
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March 19, 2013 at 5:42 PM
Hello Jack, , your poem is lovely... congratulations with your winning poem~ always* PD
Jordan Avatar
March 19, 2013 at 7:52 PM
Thanks, PD. I had no idea until I read your comment here. I should keep up better. Next time... Jack
Hunter Avatar
March 19, 2013 at 6:16 AM
Excellent, Jack! Congrats!
Jordan Avatar
March 19, 2013 at 7:54 PM
Thanks, Caleb.
Dietrich Avatar
February 27, 2013 at 5:34 PM
wow, this is breathtakingly beautiful. Soupmail for you in a few seconds.
Gorelick Avatar
February 23, 2013 at 2:22 PM
Beautiful..Ill bet you remember her name...lol...you always write the kind of poetry that I love. BG
Jordan Avatar
February 23, 2013 at 6:25 PM
Well... It was a long time ago. Thanks for reading it, and for the very nice comment. J
Andresen Avatar
February 23, 2013 at 10:33 AM
Lovely, Jack .... take good care of her. - Have a wonderful weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Jordan Avatar
February 23, 2013 at 11:08 AM
Ah, but this was long ago, in another life. J
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