Butterflies of Beauty

Nineteen pecan trees stood outside my door
And every year they would give up their yield
The squirrels were happy, but there was much more
Every fall the trees would became a field…

As brilliant orange and black curtains, abound
The Monarchs gathered on branches to rest
They would cover the trees from top to ground
‘Fore heading south for a warm place to nest.

Delicate wings fluttering in the trees
But with us, only a few days they’d stay
A ballet, as they frolicked in the breeze
Then all at once, instinct took them away.

Nature painted this scene for us to see
But only for a moment, then they'd flee.

1/11/2017
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Marcum Wong Avatar
January 19, 2017 at 5:37 AM
Betty, what a beautiful sonnet you have created. I can see why it was in the top three! Amazing imagery that is almost palpable! Congratulations! 7 ; )
Smith-Johnsen Avatar
January 13, 2017 at 11:53 PM
You were so lucky to have them rest on your pecan tree. It must really have been beautiful. Congratulations on your win.
Polydoro Avatar
January 13, 2017 at 9:47 PM
congrats on the win, Betty. A really beautiful one :)
Poteet Avatar
January 13, 2017 at 7:56 PM
What a marvelous story you have told us here, beautiful sight to behold. I wonder if they found something tasty in the trees that prepared them for their flight. Well-told, Betty. Congrats.
Krampe Avatar
January 13, 2017 at 7:31 PM
I saw a monarch grove a few times, and it was absolutely amazing - your poem reminded me of that. Congrats on your win.
Jumbo Avatar
January 13, 2017 at 2:29 PM
Very nice piece Betty.i particularly love "Nature painted this scene for us to see But only for a moment, then they'd flee" Congrats on your win.
Allison Avatar
January 13, 2017 at 1:20 PM
What an incredible picture you painted with your words Betty:-) congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
White Avatar
January 13, 2017 at 9:54 AM
Beautiful sonnet, oh how I wish I could see pecan trees!
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