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Butterflies of Beauty

Nineteen pecan trees stood outside my door And every year they would give up their yield The squirrels were happy, but there was much more Every fall the trees would became a field… As brilliant orange and black curtains, abound The Monarchs gathered on branches to rest They would cover the trees from top to ground ‘Fore heading south for a warm place to nest. Delicate wings fluttering in the trees But with us, only a few days they’d stay A ballet, as they frolicked in the breeze Then all at once, instinct took them away. Nature painted this scene for us to see But only for a moment, then they'd flee. 1/11/2017

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Date: 1/19/2017 5:37:00 AM
Betty, what a beautiful sonnet you have created. I can see why it was in the top three! Amazing imagery that is almost palpable! Congratulations! 7 ; )
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Date: 1/13/2017 11:53:00 PM
You were so lucky to have them rest on your pecan tree. It must really have been beautiful. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 1/13/2017 9:47:00 PM
congrats on the win, Betty. A really beautiful one :)
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Date: 1/13/2017 7:56:00 PM
What a marvelous story you have told us here, beautiful sight to behold. I wonder if they found something tasty in the trees that prepared them for their flight. Well-told, Betty. Congrats.
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Date: 1/13/2017 7:31:00 PM
I saw a monarch grove a few times, and it was absolutely amazing - your poem reminded me of that. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 1/13/2017 2:29:00 PM
Very nice piece Betty.i particularly love "Nature painted this scene for us to see But only for a moment, then they'd flee" Congrats on your win.
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Date: 1/13/2017 1:20:00 PM
What an incredible picture you painted with your words Betty:-) congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 1/13/2017 9:54:00 AM
Beautiful sonnet, oh how I wish I could see pecan trees!
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