Kim Rodrigues Poet Haiku

Butterflies

in the open air
cacophonous solitude ~
quiet containment

the pert butterflies
speckled and multicoloured ~
flittering about

2/16/2023
Spring Flower, Bird or Butterfly Haiku x 2
Sponsor: Tania Kitchin

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Sara Kendrick February 27, 2023 at 3:14 AM I have read your winning entry and enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing. Congratulations. Sara Kim Rodrigues February 27, 2023 at 8:23 AM Thank you :)

Christuraj Alex February 25, 2023 at 8:07 PM A great haiku on butterflies. Congratulations! Kim Rodrigues February 26, 2023 at 6:01 PM Thank you, Christuraj!

Sotto Poet February 25, 2023 at 1:24 PM Back with congratulations, Kim, on your top winning achievement; your set of haiku is so lovely. Kim Rodrigues February 26, 2023 at 6:01 PM Thank you, Lasaad!

Anne-Lise Andresen February 25, 2023 at 12:09 PM - Many colorful butterflies ... light and airy from flower to flower ... beautiful haiku, Kim :) - Congratulations on a first place in the contest :) - hugs Kim Rodrigues February 26, 2023 at 6:02 PM Thank you so much, Anne-Lise!

Sam Kauffman February 25, 2023 at 10:02 AM Butterflies are such a gift as they "flit" from flower to flower. What a beautiful image Kim. Congratulations on your win! Blessings! Kim Rodrigues February 26, 2023 at 6:03 PM Glad you enjoyed the flittering, Sam!

Paula Goldsmith February 25, 2023 at 8:08 AM Back with Congratulations on your win. Multicolored butterflies are so pretty. Have a great/blessed weekend writing away......................... Kim Rodrigues February 26, 2023 at 6:05 PM I’ve been in a butterfly tent..such a neat experience! Thank you, Paula!

Linda Alice Fowler February 25, 2023 at 7:46 AM I can just see the pert little guys flitting about :) Congratulations on your win Kim! :) Kim Rodrigues February 26, 2023 at 6:05 PM Thanks so much, Linda! :)

Heidi Sands February 25, 2023 at 4:34 AM So nice. Congratulations for your win :) Kim Rodrigues February 26, 2023 at 6:06 PM Thank you, Heidi!

Tania Kitchin February 25, 2023 at 3:39 AM Kim, a gorgeous set of butterfly haiku's, love the "flittering about" imagery, congratulations on your first place win! Kim Rodrigues February 25, 2023 at 6:07 AM Thank you so much, Tania! <3

Sara Kendrick February 22, 2023 at 4:09 AM Reads like a good contender for the contest to me. Way to go. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Won't be long before the return of the butterflies with their lightness and beauty. Sara Kim Rodrigues February 26, 2023 at 6:06 PM Spring is on its way! Thank you, Sara!

Joanna Daniel February 19, 2023 at 9:47 PM Two lovely haikus, Kim:) Kim Rodrigues February 26, 2023 at 6:07 PM Thank you, Jo!

Janice Canerdy February 19, 2023 at 12:03 PM Lovely, descriptive haiku, Kim. Janice Kim Rodrigues February 26, 2023 at 6:07 PM Thank you, Janicea,

I Am Anaya February 19, 2023 at 9:40 AM I chose the butterfly too! Peaceful like haikus should be, GL Kim! Kim Rodrigues February 26, 2023 at 6:08 PM Thanks, Anaya!

Evelyn Judy Buehler February 19, 2023 at 9:37 AM One of my favorite creatures, butterflies are so well described in these beautiful scenes. This is a fave. :) Kim Rodrigues February 26, 2023 at 6:08 PM Thank you for faving, Evelyn!

Joseph P. DiMino February 18, 2023 at 8:24 AM If someone does not like butterflies, they are not a friend of mine. Lovely imagery! Kim Rodrigues February 26, 2023 at 6:10 PM I don’t know why you wouldn’t like butterflies but I’m sure there are some. Thanks, Joe!

Victor Buhagiar February 17, 2023 at 2:06 AM With so many buildings going up, we rarely see a butterfly these days. Lovely haikus, dear Kim. Hugs. Kim Rodrigues February 26, 2023 at 6:11 PM Aww! Hope you see some! :) Hugs ~

Bill Baker February 16, 2023 at 4:34 PM Perfect topic for a great couple of Haikus. Well done! good luck! Bill Kim Rodrigues February 26, 2023 at 6:11 PM Thank qyou, Bill!:)

Vijay Pandit February 16, 2023 at 3:33 PM Your poem conjures colorful images of butterflies frolicking. Much enjoyed. Kim Rodrigues February 26, 2023 at 6:00 PM So happy you liked this, Vijay!

Michael Tor February 16, 2023 at 12:26 PM Lovely piece Kim. So few words but conveying a wonderful visual of Butterflies. This one is a favorite. Kim Rodrigues February 26, 2023 at 5:59 PM Thank you so much,Mike!

Paula Goldsmith February 16, 2023 at 11:30 AM I love this write and butterflies. Have a blessed day writing away................. Kim Rodrigues February 26, 2023 at 5:54 PM Thank you, Paula!

Sotto Poet February 16, 2023 at 10:31 AM I admire all of the gorgeous butterflies in a variety of colors that you have. Best wishes, Kim. Kim Rodrigues February 26, 2023 at 5:53 PM Thank you, Lasaad! :)

Swetha Vangaveti February 16, 2023 at 10:30 AM Loved it. Could visualise the beauty of it. Kim Rodrigues February 26, 2023 at 5:53 PM Thank you, Swetha!

Valsa George February 16, 2023 at 7:47 AM Love your pert and speckled butterflies that are flitting around ! All the best Kim. Kim Rodrigues February 26, 2023 at 5:53 PM Thank you, Valsa!