Butterflies

in the open air cacophonous solitude ~ quiet containment the pert butterflies speckled and multicoloured ~ flittering about 2/16/2023 Spring Flower, Bird or Butterfly Haiku x 2 Sponsor: Tania Kitchin

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Date: 2/27/2023 3:14:00 AM
I have read your winning entry and enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing. Congratulations. Sara
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/27/2023 8:23:00 AM
Thank you :)
Date: 2/25/2023 8:07:00 PM
A great haiku on butterflies. Congratulations!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/26/2023 6:01:00 PM
Thank you, Christuraj!
Date: 2/25/2023 1:24:00 PM
Back with congratulations, Kim, on your top winning achievement; your set of haiku is so lovely.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/26/2023 6:01:00 PM
Thank you, Lasaad!
Date: 2/25/2023 12:09:00 PM
- Many colorful butterflies ... light and airy from flower to flower ... beautiful haiku, Kim :) - Congratulations on a first place in the contest :) - hugs
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/26/2023 6:02:00 PM
Thank you so much, Anne-Lise!
Date: 2/25/2023 10:02:00 AM
Butterflies are such a gift as they "flit" from flower to flower. What a beautiful image Kim. Congratulations on your win! Blessings!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/26/2023 6:03:00 PM
Glad you enjoyed the flittering, Sam!
Date: 2/25/2023 8:08:00 AM
Back with Congratulations on your win. Multicolored butterflies are so pretty. Have a great/blessed weekend writing away.........................
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/26/2023 6:05:00 PM
I’ve been in a butterfly tent..such a neat experience! Thank you, Paula!
Date: 2/25/2023 7:46:00 AM
I can just see the pert little guys flitting about :) Congratulations on your win Kim! :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/26/2023 6:05:00 PM
Thanks so much, Linda! :)
Date: 2/25/2023 4:34:00 AM
So nice. Congratulations for your win :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/26/2023 6:06:00 PM
Thank you, Heidi!
Date: 2/25/2023 3:39:00 AM
Kim, a gorgeous set of butterfly haiku's, love the "flittering about" imagery, congratulations on your first place win!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/25/2023 6:07:00 AM
Thank you so much, Tania! <3
Date: 2/22/2023 4:09:00 AM
Reads like a good contender for the contest to me. Way to go. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Won't be long before the return of the butterflies with their lightness and beauty. Sara
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/26/2023 6:06:00 PM
Spring is on its way! Thank you, Sara!
Date: 2/19/2023 9:47:00 PM
Two lovely haikus, Kim:)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/26/2023 6:07:00 PM
Thank you, Jo!
Date: 2/19/2023 12:03:00 PM
Lovely, descriptive haiku, Kim. Janice
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/26/2023 6:07:00 PM
Thank you, Janicea,
Date: 2/19/2023 9:40:00 AM
I chose the butterfly too! Peaceful like haikus should be, GL Kim!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/26/2023 6:08:00 PM
Thanks, Anaya!
Date: 2/19/2023 9:37:00 AM
One of my favorite creatures, butterflies are so well described in these beautiful scenes. This is a fave. :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/26/2023 6:08:00 PM
Thank you for faving, Evelyn!
Date: 2/18/2023 8:24:00 AM
If someone does not like butterflies, they are not a friend of mine. Lovely imagery!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/26/2023 6:10:00 PM
I don’t know why you wouldn’t like butterflies but I’m sure there are some. Thanks, Joe!
Date: 2/17/2023 2:06:00 AM
With so many buildings going up, we rarely see a butterfly these days. Lovely haikus, dear Kim. Hugs.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/26/2023 6:11:00 PM
Aww! Hope you see some! :) Hugs ~
Date: 2/16/2023 4:34:00 PM
Perfect topic for a great couple of Haikus. Well done! good luck! Bill
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/26/2023 6:11:00 PM
Thank qyou, Bill!:)
Date: 2/16/2023 3:33:00 PM
Your poem conjures colorful images of butterflies frolicking. Much enjoyed.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/26/2023 6:00:00 PM
So happy you liked this, Vijay!
Date: 2/16/2023 12:26:00 PM
Lovely piece Kim. So few words but conveying a wonderful visual of Butterflies. This one is a favorite.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/26/2023 5:59:00 PM
Thank you so much,Mike!
Date: 2/16/2023 11:30:00 AM
I love this write and butterflies. Have a blessed day writing away.................
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/26/2023 5:54:00 PM
Thank you, Paula!
Date: 2/16/2023 10:31:00 AM
I admire all of the gorgeous butterflies in a variety of colors that you have. Best wishes, Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/26/2023 5:53:00 PM
Thank you, Lasaad! :)
Date: 2/16/2023 10:30:00 AM
Loved it. Could visualise the beauty of it.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/26/2023 5:53:00 PM
Thank you, Swetha!
Date: 2/16/2023 7:47:00 AM
Love your pert and speckled butterflies that are flitting around ! All the best Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/26/2023 5:53:00 PM
Thank you, Valsa!
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