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Lust, Love, Loss........,

he, loves her so, she, like the wind, needs, to go, he wants her, to stay, but she's, a restless flame, twisting, away, he's, feeling, the storm, the thunder, his heart, torn asunder, he, needs, the love, that she proclaimed, to fill, him up, her kisses, were so powerful, each one blew, promises, into his, empty cup, lightning called her, the storm, blew her away, leaving him, with, a burnt flame.

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Date: 4/15/2019 5:25:00 PM
Love for some is a revolving door...your poem captures this idea wonderfully.
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Vickie Hurtt - Thayer
Date: 4/15/2019 8:59:00 PM
Thanks Kristie for commenting and visiting. Vickie
Date: 4/10/2019 8:26:00 AM
Life...some loves you can hold others you must let go...Well done...
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Vickie Hurtt - Thayer
Date: 4/14/2019 8:26:00 PM
Thanks, my friend.
Date: 4/9/2019 5:32:00 PM
Love is fleeting my friend.
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Vickie Hurtt - Thayer
Date: 4/14/2019 8:26:00 PM
Sometimes..,Thanks.

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