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BUNNY - POTD

Bunny very cute
Under a big bush sleeping
Now she is awake
No one knows you are my pet
You and I friends forever

Copyright © Paula Goldsmith | Year Posted 2024

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August 12, 2024 at 7:31 AM

Looking for a poem I haven't read yet and still many but I got this one I've missed. I love it. So cute and sweet. Belated Congrats on your POTD my dearest poet friend! Thanks again for sharing. I enjoyed a lot on this one. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs

Paula Goldsmith

August 12, 2024 at 9:24 AM

Thanks for your note and for your Congratulations. Glad you found my "BUNNY" Tanka/Acrostic write to be So cute and sweet. I had 2 bunnies. 1 was wild that I tamed. 1 was a house pet (Hershey) because she looked like she was chocolate dipped. A True Story...Have a very fun day writing away...........

August 9, 2024 at 12:36 PM

Very sweet! Thank you!

Paula Goldsmith

August 12, 2024 at 9:17 AM

Thanks for your note. Glad you enjoyed reading my cute "BUNNY" Tanka/Acrostic write. It was fun to write. Have a very fun day writing away...........

Maria Fernandez-Garcia

August 1, 2024 at 12:18 AM

Paula, I'm back also with congratulations on your win in the contest. It's a lovely tank-a-crostic. Blessings.!

Paula Goldsmith

August 1, 2024 at 9:36 AM

Thanks for your note and for your Congratulations. Glad you found my "BUNNY" Tanka/Acrostic write to be a lovely tank-a-crostic. I enjoyed writing about this fun Bunny. Thanks for coming back to read again. Always great to see you here. Have a very fun day writing away...........

July 31, 2024 at 9:48 AM

Such a charming, cute Acrostic, Paula. Congratulations on your fine win and p.o.t.d. ~ Regards // paul

Paula Goldsmith

August 1, 2024 at 9:32 AM

Thanks for your note and for your Congratulations. Glad you found my "BUNNY" Tanka/Acrostic write to be Such a charming, cute Acrostic. Yes, this one was a double winner. Hooray!!! That put a big smile on my heart. Hope you are OK... Always great to see you here. Have a very fun day writing away...........

July 30, 2024 at 5:12 PM

I'm back with CONGRATS, Paula! Janice

Paula Goldsmith

July 31, 2024 at 9:18 AM

Thanks for your note and for your Congratulations. Glad you enjoyed reading my cute "BUNNY" Tanka/Acrostic write again. It is always great to see you here. Have a very fun day writing away...........

Paula Goldsmith

July 30, 2024 at 8:19 AM

"4 Place" (7/9/2024~POTD) ~ BUNNY ~ Date Written: 7/8/2024

Andrea Dietrich

July 29, 2024 at 3:01 PM

Congrats for your win in my contest and especially for your POTD you got. Small suggestion. Since you are addressing the bunny with "you, " I think it would be even better if you said in line 2:Now you are awake! Do you really have a pet rabbit that lives outdoors? I would be afraid of it getting away! So sweet though.

Paula Goldsmith

July 30, 2024 at 8:28 AM

Thanks for your note and for your Congratulations. Glad you enjoyed reading my cute "BUNNY" Tanka/Acrostic write. I enjoyed writing about this true bunny story for your contest. Thanks for having it/for my placement. Yes, many years ago I had a wild bunny I tamed. Also one from the pet store for inside the house. Have a very fun day writing away...........

July 18, 2024 at 1:52 AM

Congratulations on your POTD!

Paula Goldsmith

July 18, 2024 at 9:14 AM

Thanks for your note and for your POTD Congratulations. I am very honored. Thanks to Soup & to My Readers. Glad you enjoyed reading my cute "BUNNY" Tanka/Acrostic write. It was from many years ago about a bunny in our yard. True Story... Have a very fun day writing away...........

July 17, 2024 at 10:06 PM

Congratulations on your POTD Dear, Paula.

Paula Goldsmith

July 18, 2024 at 9:11 AM

Thanks for your note and for your POTD Congratulations. I am very honored. Thanks to Soup & to My Readers. Glad you enjoyed reading my cute "BUNNY" Tanka/Acrostic write. I enjoyed writing about this true story. It was about a bunny in our yard. Have a very fun day writing away...........

July 14, 2024 at 9:32 AM

Nice Tanka on favorite pet. Congrats on POTD

Paula Goldsmith

July 14, 2024 at 1:11 PM

Thanks for your note and for your POTD Congratulations. I am very honored. Thanks to Soup & to My Readers. Glad you enjoyed reading my cute "BUNNY" Tanka/Acrostic write. This is a true story about a bunny in our yard. It was many years ago... Have a very fun day writing away...........

July 12, 2024 at 6:16 PM

playful tanka which garners a potd...congrats, paula and bunny!

Paula Goldsmith

July 13, 2024 at 9:11 AM

Thanks for your note and for your POTD Congratulations. I am very honored. Thanks to Soup & to My Readers. Glad you enjoyed reading my cute "BUNNY" Tanka/Acrostic write. I enjoyed bringing this true story to life. The bunnies were very playful. Have a very fun day writing away...........

Eileen Manassian

July 12, 2024 at 12:50 AM

How sweet!! Congrats on your POTD with this charming write. Bunnies are awesome.

Paula Goldsmith

July 13, 2024 at 9:08 AM

Thanks for your note and for your POTD Congratulations. I am very honored. Thanks to Soup & to My Readers. Glad you enjoyed reading my cute "BUNNY" Tanka/Acrostic write. Oh yes, bunnies are very awesome. A true story about the 1 in our yard. That is why I had the line, "No one knows you are my pet." Have a very fun day writing away...........

July 11, 2024 at 9:13 AM

A very cute little acrostic poem here Paula. An enjoyable read, it brought a smile to face. Well done. Oh, congratulations on POTD as well!!!! A well deserved penning!!!

Paula Goldsmith

July 11, 2024 at 9:31 AM

Thanks for your note and for your POTD Congratulations. I am very honored. Thanks to Soup & to My Readers. Glad you found my "BUNNY" Tanka/Acrostic write to be A very cute little acrostic poem. It is a true story about one bunny in our yard. It makes me happy to know this put a smile on your face. Smiles are free so give them away. "Smile" Have a very fun day writing away...........

July 11, 2024 at 6:25 AM

Quite sweet dear Paula. Congratulations on your POTD. Enjoy your honor.

Paula Goldsmith

July 11, 2024 at 9:28 AM

Thanks for your note and for your POTD Congratulations. I am very honored. Thanks to Soup & to My Readers. Glad you found my "BUNNY" Tanka/Acrostic write to be Quite sweet. It is a true story about the 1 in our yard. That is why I had the line, "No one knows you are my pet." This was many years ago at another place I lived. Have a very fun day writing away...........

July 11, 2024 at 5:52 AM

Oh so sweet. Congratulations Paula! :)

Paula Goldsmith

July 11, 2024 at 9:25 AM

Thanks for your note and for your POTD Congratulations. I am very honored. Thanks to Soup & to My Readers. Glad you found my "BUNNY" write to be Oh so sweet. It is a true story. I had 1 in our yard. That is why I had the line, "No one knows you are my pet." I had 1 very small bunny in the house. Hershey, she looked chocolate dipped. Hugs... Have a very fun day writing away...........

Jerry Brotherton

July 10, 2024 at 1:02 PM

Congratulatins on your POTD honors, my friend.

Paula Goldsmith

July 11, 2024 at 9:21 AM

Thanks for your note and for your POTD Congratulations. I am very honored. Thanks to Soup & to My Readers. Glad you enjoyed reading my cute "BUNNY" Tanka/Acrostic write. It was fun to write... Have a very fun day writing away...........

Panagiota Romios

July 10, 2024 at 10:47 AM

Another late guest sorry I missed this one Paula congratulations on the very cute poem. I like it.. Pangie congratulations twice. Pangie

Paula Goldsmith

July 11, 2024 at 9:19 AM

Thanks for your note and for your POTD Congratulations. I am very honored. Thanks to Soup & to My Readers. Glad you liked reading my cute "BUNNY" Tanka/Acrostic write. Always great to see you. Do Not Be Sorry, you are Never late. You are right on time. Have a very fun day writing away............

July 10, 2024 at 4:54 AM

I'm a day late in congratulating you on your Bunny tale being chosen as POTD. You are a very supportive poet to so many on the site, Paula. I appreciate your encouragement.

Paula Goldsmith

July 10, 2024 at 9:07 AM

Thanks for your note and for your POTD Congratulations. I am very honored. Thanks to Soup & to My Readers. Glad you enjoyed reading my cute "BUNNY" Tanka/Acrostic write. Always great to see you. You are Never late/right on time. Thanks for your very kind words. I feel I am here to help others in anyway. I say, Thanks for the help I get... Have a very fun day writing away............

Stephan McBride

July 9, 2024 at 3:25 PM

Congratulations on POTD, very well put together, for you are a friend and joy for all : )

Paula Goldsmith

July 10, 2024 at 9:00 AM

Thanks for your note and for your POTD Congratulations. I am very honored. Thanks to Soup & to My Readers. Glad you enjoyed reading my cute "BUNNY" Tanka/Acrostic write. I love animals but have none now. This BUNNY write was fun to bring to life.. Have a very fun day writing away............

Clive Culverhouse

July 9, 2024 at 3:14 PM

Congratulations on earning poem of the day, quite an intriguing write I thought for some reason the line No one knows you are my pet makes the poem for me, not overly sure why, it just really works!

Paula Goldsmith

July 10, 2024 at 8:56 AM

Thanks for your note and for your POTD Congratulations. I am very honored. Thanks to Soup & to My Readers. Glad you enjoyed reading my cute "BUNNY" Tanka/Acrostic write. This write was about the 1 in our yard. That is why I had the line, "No one knows you are my pet." I had 1 very small in the house. Hershey, she looked chocolate dipped. Have a very fun day writing away............

July 9, 2024 at 2:23 PM

Paula, a cute one, congratulations on POTD.

Paula Goldsmith

July 10, 2024 at 8:47 AM

Thanks for your note and for your POTD Congratulations. I am very honored. Thanks to Soup & to My Readers. Glad you enjoyed reading my cute "BUNNY" Tanka/Acrostic write. Have a very fun day writing away...........

July 9, 2024 at 1:48 PM

Dear Paula, your thoughts bring a smile to my heart. Animals give unconditional love and make such great friends. This is cute, clever and so creative. Beautiful in every way. Congratulations my sweet friend, on Poem of the Day. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

Paula Goldsmith

July 10, 2024 at 8:47 AM

Thanks for your note and for your POTD Congratulations. I am very honored. Thanks to Soup & to My Readers. Glad you found my "BUNNY" write to be cute/clever/so creative. Yes, animals do give unconditional love/make such great friends. These 2 bunnies sure did. Hugs... Have a very fun day writing away...........

Christina Bowring

July 9, 2024 at 12:59 PM

Dear Paula, many congratulations for POTD with this adorable poem. It’s so sweet and you can easily visualise the little bunny sleeping. I absolutely love little bunnies- I had one once and he was so intelligent (more like a dog) and we were devoted to each other. So enjoyed this. Thank you for sharing :):)

Paula Goldsmith

July 9, 2024 at 1:31 PM

Thanks for your note and for your POTD Congratulations. I am very honored. Thanks to Soup & to My Readers. Glad you found my cute "BUNNY" Tanka/Acrostic write to be adorable/so sweet. The 1 wild 1 was so intelligent. 1 was a house pet (Hershey) because she looked like she was chocolate dipped. Loved them both. Have a very fun day writing away............

July 9, 2024 at 12:41 PM

Congratulations on your POTD Paula Goldsmith! Bunny love, they make good pets xhugs

Paula Goldsmith

July 9, 2024 at 1:26 PM

Thanks for your note and for your POTD Congratulations. I am very honored. Thanks to Soup & to My Readers. Glad you enjoyed reading my cute "BUNNY" Tanka/Acrostic write. 1 was wild. 1 was a house pet (Hershey) because she looked like she was chocolate dipped. Have a very fun day writing away............

July 9, 2024 at 12:01 PM

Cute verse Paula, congratulations to you on today's POTD honour. Tom

Paula Goldsmith

July 9, 2024 at 12:10 PM

Thanks for your note and for your POTD Congratulations. I am very honored. Thanks to Soup & to My Readers. Glad you found my "BUNNY" write to be a Cute verse. It is a true story from many years ago.... Have a very fun day writing away............

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