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Bumblebee

jumbo bumblebee how it soars amazes me on wings so darn wee Robert L. Hinshaw, CMSgt, USAF, Retired © All Rights Reserved Placed No. 2 in Carol Brown's "What's The Buzz" Contest - March 2011

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Date: 5/20/2011 12:23:00 PM
I have a feeling I really like this one Bob. Have a great weekend my friend. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/27/2011 8:24:00 AM
Nice one Robert, aye, these wee wings sure go ten to the dozen....:)
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Date: 3/11/2011 8:05:00 AM
Wonderful Haiku Robert !Congrats on your well deserved win!-kashinath
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Date: 3/10/2011 3:55:00 PM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
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Date: 3/10/2011 12:09:00 PM
According to the laws of Aerodynamics the bumblebee should not be able to fly, but he doesn't know that and so....he flies. Magnificent Haiku, Robert. Many congrat's on your BIG WIN. Lainie
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Date: 3/10/2011 10:23:00 AM
Such an honor Bob to share a spot with you in your worthy honored poem's second place. Agape, Moses
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Date: 3/10/2011 9:24:00 AM
So happy to see your poem ranking high in Carol's contest, Bob. Congratulations! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/10/2011 6:14:00 AM
Congratulations on the win in my contest Bob. Thank you for supporting my contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/10/2011 12:10:00 AM
On wings so darn wee Wow. many congrats dear friend.
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Date: 3/9/2011 8:06:00 PM
Congrats on your win with this "wee" little write..enjoyed. BG
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Date: 3/9/2011 6:19:00 PM
Really cute , for a tough 'ol Sarge! Congratulations, RAY
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Date: 3/9/2011 5:07:00 PM
congratlations to you Rob! looking good
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Date: 3/9/2011 3:59:00 PM
And cute as can be. I wrote on the bumble bee also. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 3/9/2011 2:44:00 PM
need i say this is a fave robert?? cheers for the gorgeous win! :) huggs, nette
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Date: 3/9/2011 2:27:00 PM
Way to go Bob and big congrats on your win in Carol;s contest my friend with this amazing entry... luved it from the start.. enjoy another top ten victory with luv..
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Date: 3/9/2011 2:03:00 PM
that darn wee was so cute! congrats, Robert.
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Date: 3/9/2011 1:53:00 PM
Congratulations on the second place win in the contest of Carol, Bob
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Date: 3/2/2011 5:24:00 PM
So they are...Noisy little creates also..I hope to see you there if we never meet in person on earth....Enjoyed reading your work..Good luck in the contest for it reads like winning material...Sara
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Date: 3/2/2011 4:29:00 PM
It amazes me too Bob how they can fly so h8igh and fast and be so big.. good luck in the contest.. am afraid of those stingers luv..
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Date: 3/2/2011 4:16:00 PM
they are funny creatures, lol :)
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Date: 3/2/2011 4:01:00 PM
Don't know how they flutter their tiny wings so fast, Bob, but they scare the bejeezus out of me. Very cute entry for Carol's contest. Wishing you success! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/2/2011 10:23:00 AM
A stunning entry Bob, smiles all round from me.. Hope your week's been a good one thus far ;-)
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Date: 3/1/2011 6:51:00 AM
Another fantastic entry, Bob. Beautiful haiku. Enjoyed. Good luck. Ralphie
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Date: 2/28/2011 4:29:00 PM
Simply beautiful enforced rhyme with pleasing visual, Bob
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