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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/20/2011 12:23:00 PM

I have a feeling I really like this one Bob. Have a great weekend my friend. Love, Carol

James Fraser

Date: 3/27/2011 8:24:00 AM

Nice one Robert, aye, these wee wings sure go ten to the dozen....:)

Kash Poet

Date: 3/11/2011 8:05:00 AM

Wonderful Haiku Robert !Congrats on your well deserved win!-kashinath

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/10/2011 3:55:00 PM

Congratulations on your win..Sara

Elaine George

Date: 3/10/2011 12:09:00 PM

According to the laws of Aerodynamics the bumblebee should not be able to fly, but he doesn't know that and so....he flies. Magnificent Haiku, Robert. Many congrat's on your BIG WIN. Lainie

John Freeman

Date: 3/10/2011 10:23:00 AM

Such an honor Bob to share a spot with you in your worthy honored poem's second place. Agape, Moses

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/10/2011 9:24:00 AM

So happy to see your poem ranking high in Carol's contest, Bob. Congratulations! Love, Carolyn

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/10/2011 6:14:00 AM

Congratulations on the win in my contest Bob. Thank you for supporting my contest. Love, Carol

Tahera Mannan

Date: 3/10/2011 12:10:00 AM

On wings so darn wee Wow. many congrats dear friend.

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 3/9/2011 8:06:00 PM

Congrats on your win with this "wee" little write..enjoyed. BG

Ray Dillard

Date: 3/9/2011 6:19:00 PM

Really cute , for a tough 'ol Sarge! Congratulations, RAY

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 3/9/2011 5:07:00 PM

congratlations to you Rob! looking good

Joyce Johnson

Date: 3/9/2011 3:59:00 PM

And cute as can be. I wrote on the bumble bee also. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce

Nette Onclaud

Date: 3/9/2011 2:44:00 PM

need i say this is a fave robert?? cheers for the gorgeous win! :) huggs, nette

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/9/2011 2:27:00 PM

Way to go Bob and big congrats on your win in Carol;s contest my friend with this amazing entry... luved it from the start.. enjoy another top ten victory with luv..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/9/2011 2:03:00 PM

that darn wee was so cute! congrats, Robert.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 3/9/2011 1:53:00 PM

Congratulations on the second place win in the contest of Carol, Bob

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/2/2011 5:24:00 PM

So they are...Noisy little creates also..I hope to see you there if we never meet in person on earth....Enjoyed reading your work..Good luck in the contest for it reads like winning material...Sara

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/2/2011 4:29:00 PM

It amazes me too Bob how they can fly so h8igh and fast and be so big.. good luck in the contest.. am afraid of those stingers luv..

Joshua Lacey

Date: 3/2/2011 4:16:00 PM

they are funny creatures, lol :)

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/2/2011 4:01:00 PM

Don't know how they flutter their tiny wings so fast, Bob, but they scare the bejeezus out of me. Very cute entry for Carol's contest. Wishing you success! Love, Carolyn

Wilma Neels

Date: 3/2/2011 10:23:00 AM

A stunning entry Bob, smiles all round from me.. Hope your week's been a good one thus far ;-)

Ralph Taylor

Date: 3/1/2011 6:51:00 AM

Another fantastic entry, Bob. Beautiful haiku. Enjoyed. Good luck. Ralphie

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 2/28/2011 4:29:00 PM

Simply beautiful enforced rhyme with pleasing visual, Bob