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Bumblebee

jumbo bumblebee

how it soars amazes me

on wings so darn wee

Robert L. Hinshaw, CMSgt, USAF, Retired
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Placed No. 2 in Carol Brown's "What's The Buzz" Contest - March 2011

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Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 5/20/2011 12:23:00 PM I have a feeling I really like this one Bob. Have a great weekend my friend. Love, Carol Login to Reply

James Fraser Date: 3/27/2011 8:24:00 AM Nice one Robert, aye, these wee wings sure go ten to the dozen....:) Login to Reply

Kash Poet Date: 3/11/2011 8:05:00 AM Wonderful Haiku Robert !Congrats on your well deserved win!-kashinath Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 3/10/2011 3:55:00 PM Congratulations on your win..Sara Login to Reply

Elaine George Date: 3/10/2011 12:09:00 PM According to the laws of Aerodynamics the bumblebee should not be able to fly, but he doesn't know that and so....he flies. Magnificent Haiku, Robert. Many congrat's on your BIG WIN. Lainie Login to Reply

John Freeman Date: 3/10/2011 10:23:00 AM Such an honor Bob to share a spot with you in your worthy honored poem's second place. Agape, Moses Login to Reply

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 3/10/2011 9:24:00 AM So happy to see your poem ranking high in Carol's contest, Bob. Congratulations! Love, Carolyn Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 3/10/2011 6:14:00 AM Congratulations on the win in my contest Bob. Thank you for supporting my contest. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Tahera Mannan Date: 3/10/2011 12:10:00 AM On wings so darn wee Wow. many congrats dear friend. Login to Reply

Barbara Gorelick Date: 3/9/2011 8:06:00 PM Congrats on your win with this "wee" little write..enjoyed. BG Login to Reply

Ray Dillard Date: 3/9/2011 6:19:00 PM Really cute , for a tough 'ol Sarge! Congratulations, RAY Login to Reply

Robert A. Dufresne Date: 3/9/2011 5:07:00 PM congratlations to you Rob! looking good Login to Reply

Joyce Johnson Date: 3/9/2011 3:59:00 PM And cute as can be. I wrote on the bumble bee also. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce Login to Reply

Nette Onclaud Date: 3/9/2011 2:44:00 PM need i say this is a fave robert?? cheers for the gorgeous win! :) huggs, nette Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 3/9/2011 2:27:00 PM Way to go Bob and big congrats on your win in Carol;s contest my friend with this amazing entry... luved it from the start.. enjoy another top ten victory with luv.. Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 3/9/2011 2:03:00 PM that darn wee was so cute! congrats, Robert. Login to Reply

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 3/9/2011 1:53:00 PM Congratulations on the second place win in the contest of Carol, Bob Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 3/2/2011 5:24:00 PM So they are...Noisy little creates also..I hope to see you there if we never meet in person on earth....Enjoyed reading your work..Good luck in the contest for it reads like winning material...Sara Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 3/2/2011 4:29:00 PM It amazes me too Bob how they can fly so h8igh and fast and be so big.. good luck in the contest.. am afraid of those stingers luv.. Login to Reply

Joshua Lacey Date: 3/2/2011 4:16:00 PM they are funny creatures, lol :) Login to Reply

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 3/2/2011 4:01:00 PM Don't know how they flutter their tiny wings so fast, Bob, but they scare the bejeezus out of me. Very cute entry for Carol's contest. Wishing you success! Love, Carolyn Login to Reply

Wilma Neels Date: 3/2/2011 10:23:00 AM A stunning entry Bob, smiles all round from me.. Hope your week's been a good one thus far ;-) Login to Reply

Ralph Taylor Date: 3/1/2011 6:51:00 AM Another fantastic entry, Bob. Beautiful haiku. Enjoyed. Good luck. Ralphie Login to Reply

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 2/28/2011 4:29:00 PM Simply beautiful enforced rhyme with pleasing visual, Bob Login to Reply