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I was going over some old poems.  This is one I wrote for Constance La France, who was known as Broken Wings at the time.  As you can see, a soul who has suffered so much in her life, but is still strong...

Death followed her, like an unwelcome guide. Grim Reaper stalking, forced her shadow to hide. Angel of death took her sister, but let her survive. How could a child understand death and being alive? Other siblings distracted her suffering and pain, like rays of sunshine on dark days with heavy rain. A caterpillar seeking a cocoon to shelter from bruising, for the wounds she had suffered were not from her choosing. With fragile wings the butterfly gradually learned to fly, when falling in love, her beloved made her feel so high. But the Grim Reaper returned and took her parents away, heartbroken she wondered how long the pain would stay. Malevolently, death returned like a bitter enemy, mercilessly snatched her babies without integrity. Not content, Grim Reaper returned without warning, stole her beloved – her tears never stopped falling. Tormented emotions meant each day was full of anguish, terrorized by dark demons who continued to languish. Losing loved ones and falling into depression deeper. Sensitive and fragile, she beckoned the Grim reaper. Preparing to die – surviving was no longer her intention, as the Grim Reaper approached – there was an intervention. An ethereal light appeared, illuminating hope through her heart. Death fled like a coward, afraid of the light, he would depart. Wings broken, but still intact – butterfly began to write, expressing her emotions, suppressing them with delight. Angel of death would return one day, that was for sure, but, producing beautiful poetry was temporarily her cure.
Originally written in 26 December 2015 Re-posted 19 November 2020 Dedicated to the poet formerly knows as Broken Wings (Constance)

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Date: 3/29/2022 4:53:00 AM
What a lovely tribute to a wonderful poetess ! Constance is always at the top ! I never knew she is a butterfly with broken wings. I cannot imagine one going through this much of trauma.... ! Still with unusual resilience , she has sprung back to be the reigning queen of poetry soup. Kudos to her and the poet in you who has sketched this melancholic portrait of extra ordinary dimensions !
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Date: 5/25/2021 10:50:00 AM
What an "Amazing" write. I love your line, "Wings broken, but still intact – butterfly began to write," She is a beautiful writer. This is a great tribute to Constance. "Great Job" Have a blessed day...........
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Date: 2/11/2021 6:45:00 AM
Wow! A powerful piece worthy of return re-reads. Your opening line simile grabbed from the get go. Best wishes, Brian
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Date: 2/2/2021 6:14:00 AM
I am so amazed! What a beautiful poem for an amazing lady.
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Date: 11/27/2020 8:57:00 PM
Hello Silent One … the battle for survival never retreats so the grim reaper is never too far away but sometimes set backs can make us stronger. A powerful poem indeed SO - Lindsay
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Date: 11/26/2020 3:05:00 PM
Thanks for re-posting - a fitting tribute to a strong woman.
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Date: 11/25/2020 4:27:00 AM
Thanks for re-posting this gem, SO. What a beautiful tribute to a wonderful woman. You have a huge heart my friend. Stay well and keep that ink flowing. CM
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Silent One
Date: 11/25/2020 8:43:00 AM
Thank you..
Date: 11/24/2020 4:33:00 AM
What beautiful memories you have of Constance Silent One - she sounds to have been an awesome poetess on soup. As she was known as 'Broken Wings' very fitting that you re-posted this apt and wonderful write from your talented, thoughtful golden pen. Blessings and hugs, Jennifer.
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Silent One
Date: 11/25/2020 8:43:00 AM
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Date: 11/22/2020 4:51:00 AM
Wonderful and heartfelt piece for a lovely lady Silent One...
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Silent One
Date: 11/23/2020 9:41:00 AM
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Date: 11/20/2020 8:57:00 PM
Oh my !! This is my first time reading these words from your pen. A heart can only take so much- at once. Or within a certain period of time. Sad moments falling like dominoes. Even though her wings have endured so much, Constance is strong. Silent One, your thoughts caress gently around me and my heart. Thank you for being here. ~ Brandy
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Silent One
Date: 11/23/2020 9:41:00 AM
Thank you..
Date: 11/20/2020 4:28:00 PM
WOW!!! This is a beautiful poem
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Silent One
Date: 11/23/2020 9:41:00 AM
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Date: 11/20/2020 9:16:00 AM
S.O. This is a beautiful, vividly descriptive poem--a touching tribute to Constance. Janice
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Silent One
Date: 11/23/2020 9:41:00 AM
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Date: 11/20/2020 3:46:00 AM
Great tribute to a very strong woman. I admire her strength. This made me so emotional especially when I remembered her reply to my comments on her poem six relatives. I have no relatives alive. She still writes some inspirational poems. You both are inspirational. Regards Rama
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Silent One
Date: 11/20/2020 8:04:00 AM
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Date: 11/19/2020 9:48:00 PM
This is a truly beautiful poem. It touched my heart.
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Silent One
Date: 11/20/2020 8:04:00 AM
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Date: 11/19/2020 6:54:00 PM
Your continued respect and support to so many on PS shows a lot about your character. I'm glad that I have came across your amazing poetry. You're truly an inspiration. Have a great night :)
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Silent One
Date: 11/20/2020 8:04:00 AM
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Date: 11/19/2020 6:20:00 PM
You have made Dear Heart's day by posting this again, Silent One. I know how appreciative she is of this poem. It is wonderful of you to repost it, and you captured her essence to a tee!!
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Silent One
Date: 11/20/2020 8:04:00 AM
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Date: 11/19/2020 6:04:00 PM
Brilliant write, SO! An excellent tribute to a poetic giant/PS queen of darkness(who happens to be a gem of a person to boot). Wow, I had no idea Constance has gone through so much!
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Silent One
Date: 11/20/2020 8:05:00 AM
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Date: 11/19/2020 5:51:00 PM
Beautifully written poem, powerful, it really stirred up my emotions.
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Silent One
Date: 11/20/2020 8:05:00 AM
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Date: 11/19/2020 1:27:00 PM
A beautiful dedication SO, we really have to count our blessings sometimes for there are many worse off who have suffered so much. Tom
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Silent One
Date: 11/20/2020 8:05:00 AM
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Date: 11/19/2020 9:47:00 AM
Beautiful poem.! I love this :)
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Silent One
Date: 11/19/2020 10:28:00 AM
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Date: 11/19/2020 9:40:00 AM
Wow!! Narrates a struggled past beautifully
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Silent One
Date: 11/19/2020 10:28:00 AM
Thanks.
Date: 11/19/2020 9:07:00 AM
Very sad and moving. I really feel you understand. only one who writes like this must have suffered a superb tribute to a great poetess. well done.
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Silent One
Date: 11/19/2020 10:32:00 AM
To be honest I have not suffered even a little like Constance... Her life story is full of sadness but she is an inspirational person and sign of strength
Date: 11/19/2020 7:40:00 AM
WoW! Silent, What touching and moving write to pen for Constance( Broken Wings). All the heartache she has gone through has made her strong. She is a remarkable lady with a beautiful soul. She pours her heart out in her poetry. Thanks for reposting this again. Have a great day:-) Alexis
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Silent One
Date: 11/19/2020 11:11:00 AM
Thank you Alexis, been through so much, but still so strong and always writing wonderful poetry
Date: 11/19/2020 5:09:00 AM
You are a dear friend to Constance, SO. From her reaction in the note below, it's obvious you touched her deeply with this moving poem. Didn't know she had been through so much. She is a profile in courage. Your tribute is worthy of praise and accolades it receives.
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Silent One
Date: 11/19/2020 11:10:00 AM
Thank you Vijay, this one is almost five years old...
Date: 11/19/2020 4:33:00 AM
Silent, you have touched my heart deeply with posting this beautiful and emotional poem from 2015. Thank you. I remember the day you posted this the first time, I was so moved by your compassion and again I am today. As you know recently I decided to write under my own name it was time and though still fragile my wings are healing, a FAV forever _Constance
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Silent One
Date: 11/20/2020 6:09:00 AM
Melissa that is very kind of you to say, but I am not worthy to be called an angel, just human, doing what humans should do.. Thank you.
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Melissa Tracy
Date: 11/19/2020 1:36:00 PM
Constance your courage and flexible puzzle pieces to your heart are beautifully captured here in this moving piece from S1...I'm so glad you adapted repaired your wings spreading more healing onto others through your own poetic writes...S1 I think many could agree you could also be called Soup Angel as you continue to make a difference by reaching out offering encouragement while sharing pieces of your own personal journey...you are both truly inspiring..best wishes to you both
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Silent One
Date: 11/19/2020 11:09:00 AM
You are welcome, you are a wonderful person and poet, who has been through so much in her life... Thank you for always being a good friend and supportive on here.
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