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Broken Places

After his d e a t h - I fell into a deep black void of nothingness, my body bruised, my soul s h a t t e r e d, and my heart in pieces; I was a shadow of ME, and now today, well PART of me dwells with his bones. _______________________________ December 4, 2016 Poetry/Free Verse/Broken Places Copyright Protected, ID 16-855-089-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Written for the contest, Depression Is Third Place

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Date: 12/17/2016 2:20:00 AM
Congratulations, Kai
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Date: 12/9/2016 8:57:00 PM
oooh, that last line is magnificent, in an eerie way , Constance. BIG congrats on your well deserved win.
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Date: 12/9/2016 9:09:00 AM
Broken Wings, very heartfelt poem congratulations on your win very good job hugs Eve
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Date: 12/9/2016 7:14:00 AM
This is sad and beautiful, Constance. Congrats on your win. Agnes
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Date: 12/9/2016 3:10:00 AM
Hi BW, I'm just coming back to say congratulations on your win. It was well deserved: -) Alexis
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Date: 12/9/2016 12:26:00 AM
Black void of nothingness.... that is exactly what it is.
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Date: 12/4/2016 6:58:00 PM
Sounds like mourning to me. You never forget and that is completely understandable because of the wonderful heart that you have.
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