Broken Bleeding Heart

"When everything that ticked—has stopped—
And Space stares—all around—
Or Grisly frosts—first Autumn morns,
Repeal the Beating Ground—" Emily Dickinson

I can't hear the beat of my own heart, it was silenced between the gasps of your last breaths and the touch of time as they stripped you of life. I remember standing there holding your hands as they fell from grip, resting atop your chest. I still see you there, like a shadow on a moonlit wall, distorted darkness that bends in the wind's call. The trees dance in its gossamer breath, much like my mind in its recollection, as their leaves twirl around and then spiral down towards the ground. They are more grounded than I am these days, I seem to get lost in the frame of memories that Autumn always brings forth. I hear you whisper my name in fragmented frames of mind as I bleed August across the folds of life and death.

                             drops of crimson fall
                       like autumn leaves upon ground
                         my heart bleeds the same




July 20, 2019
Writing Challenge 2, July 2019- Melancholy- Poetry Contest
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Breidenthal Avatar
August 2, 2019 at 5:55 AM
Congrats! What a fantastic, beautiful and wondrous poem. Thanks for sharing! -JWE
Adams Avatar
August 2, 2019 at 6:47 AM
Thank you JW :) hugs
Makama Avatar
July 30, 2019 at 1:08 PM
Your consistency makes your already wonderful craft majestic. Yet another lovely piece. This is really great..
Adams Avatar
July 30, 2019 at 7:25 PM
Thank you so much for the visit and your kind comment :) hugs
Proxenos Avatar
July 27, 2019 at 2:41 PM
Hi Sandra, Congrats. on a truly excellent write - majestic, sad but beautiful! Hugs, Jennifer.
Adams Avatar
July 27, 2019 at 5:12 PM
Thank you Jennifer...sometimes my muse does well with challenges, other times not, but i have two other poems that i fed off a famous poets quote, or part of their poem that took top spots as well... hugs :)
Hamilton Avatar
July 25, 2019 at 9:15 AM
Another majestic write Sandy, I am in awe of this masterpiece of melancholy, definitely a worthy winner!
Adams Avatar
July 26, 2019 at 10:08 AM
Thank you so much John :) hugs
Kereopa Avatar
July 25, 2019 at 6:47 AM
Congratulations Sandra, beautiful poem. fav too.
Adams Avatar
July 26, 2019 at 9:24 AM
Thank you Georgia for your kind comment and making my poem a fave :) hugs
La France Avatar
July 24, 2019 at 12:13 PM
Sandra, congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this emotional and so beautifully sad Haibun, this was exceptional writing - well done !
Adams Avatar
July 25, 2019 at 8:18 AM
Thank you so much for hosting the contest and my win along with your kind words. Hugs :)
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July 24, 2019 at 9:07 AM
Congrats Sandra on your top win with your poignant poem.
Adams Avatar
July 26, 2019 at 10:09 AM
Thank you Jeanne :) hugs
Wolf Avatar
July 23, 2019 at 9:29 PM
Congrats, Sandra, on your win in the contest with this unique approach to 'beautiful sandness.' Richly deserved. Best wishes, Gershon
Ashley Avatar
July 23, 2019 at 7:21 PM
Sandra, your potent pen held my heart captive in the melancholy mood of your dramatic and breathtaking poem. The sad beauty of your haiku is a poignant finale to an exquisite piece. Congratulations on your excellent win in Dear Heart’s contest. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
Adams Avatar
July 26, 2019 at 10:12 AM
Thank you Susan. Sometimes picking a quote from someone can feed the muse nicely. I have done a few like this! Hugs
Krutsinger Avatar
July 22, 2019 at 5:39 AM
" The trees dance in its gossamer breath, much like my mind in its recollection, as their leaves twirl around and then spiral down towards the ground." - Lovely writing!
Adams Avatar
July 26, 2019 at 10:13 AM
Thank you so much my friend :) hugs
One Avatar
July 21, 2019 at 4:10 PM
Great storytelling Sandra..
Adams Avatar
July 21, 2019 at 6:08 PM
Thank you my friend :) hugs
Sergi Avatar
July 21, 2019 at 8:18 AM
A portrait poignancy done so beautifully, Sandra!
Adams Avatar
July 21, 2019 at 11:30 AM
Thank you Ralph....hugs :)
Rodrigues Avatar
July 20, 2019 at 8:23 PM
A sad write written beautifully!
Adams Avatar
July 21, 2019 at 11:29 AM
Thank you so much Kim :) hugs
Godwin Avatar
July 20, 2019 at 6:31 PM
Absolutely beautiful writing, a stunning haibun that reveals the talent pushing your pen. I am impressed, love this. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
Adams Avatar
July 20, 2019 at 6:56 PM
Thank you Cay Cay, not sure if you saw it before or after i changed the haiku slightly.... hugs :)
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