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British Virgin Isle

Derived from heaven, a gift from god, August waters, clear as the sky. Such stately beauty, worthy of laud. The sand soft as clouds, from way up high. Few years back, we took a sojourn. Vast and grand the islands stood reticent, Like statues and mountains, holding prowess. Infatuated, I had no concern. After a week our time there was decent, The islands gifts still seemed boundless. Though knowing all things must meet their end, I forced a goodbye to this new friend.

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Moon Flower

Date: 9/27/2016 3:22:00 AM

That's the way to go! Congrats on your first entry and welcome to Poetry Soup, Lorenzo. :)

Skat A

Date: 9/26/2016 3:13:00 PM

Lorenzo, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT

Skat A

Date: 9/26/2016 3:11:00 PM

you did good. skat

Cyndi Macmillan

Date: 9/21/2016 11:11:00 PM

I can only imagine a trip like this.. I like the light mood of this piece... I have experienced "bonding" with a place and know how hard it can be to leave. Welcome to Soup and I hope you enjoy your new membership.

Lorenzo Migliara
Date: 9/22/2016 8:14:00 PM

Thanks so much and yeah it was quite the experience.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/21/2016 9:15:00 PM

Deep write, Lorenzo, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Lorenzo Migliara
Date: 9/22/2016 8:14:00 PM

Hi! I'm always open to criticism thank you so much and yeah i actually joined looking at the contest side of it.