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Feathered Wings

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A majestic golden eagle wakens to the cool morning air. And preens and prims its flight feathers grooming each with diligent care. Flies buzz over yesterday’s kill scraps warmed by the rays of the sun. And as night shadows disappear darkness is defeated, dawn’s won. A tree top branch provides a perch from which it can survey the land. And launching high into the sky its territory's swiftly scanned. Hungry fledglings flex feathered wings stretching formidable muscles. And the approach of their mother is greeted by sibling tussles. While calling and circling close by she urges them to do their best. And the eaglets take to the air no longer shackled to their nest.

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Line Gauthier

Date: 5/12/2018 10:37:00 PM

Beautiful, Emile.

Emile Pinet
Date: 5/13/2018 11:22:00 AM

Thanks Line, I appreciate your support. Emile.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/25/2015 5:58:00 PM

very nice. I enjoyed how you bold printed the words used. Congrats for your win.

Emile Pinet
Date: 10/26/2015 8:16:00 AM

Thanks Andrea, I appreciate your support. Emile.

Paul Callus

Date: 10/25/2015 5:21:00 AM

A lovely and informative poem, Emile. Deservedly a winner...congratulations. // Noted Connie's comment; seems like we understood the rules differently...I thought the words had to be in the same order as set out by the sponsor; that sort of slightly tied my hands:) ~ Regards // paul

Emile Pinet
Date: 10/25/2015 9:57:00 AM

Thanks Paul, yes the instrutions did leave room for missinturpetaion. I appreciate the visit. Emile.

Michael Tor

Date: 10/23/2015 10:24:00 PM

Emile a very informative write. Congratulations on your win.

Emile Pinet
Date: 10/24/2015 11:13:00 AM

Thanks Michael, I appreciate your encouragement and support. Emile.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/23/2015 2:36:00 PM

Congrats on your eagle landing on the winners’ page..Way to go!!! Aren’t those eagles a vision of beauty..Sara

Emile Pinet
Date: 10/23/2015 5:57:00 PM

Thanks Sandra, I appreciate your encouragement and support. Emile.

Sandra Haight

Date: 10/23/2015 8:58:00 AM

Very nice facts about our Golden Eagle brought to us so beautiful through your imagery, Emile. Congratulations on your nice win. Sandra

Emile Pinet
Date: 10/23/2015 12:59:00 PM

Thanks Sandra, your comments are most welcome and eagerly sought. Emile.

Lin Lane

Date: 10/23/2015 8:46:00 AM

Excellent write, Emile. I especially like the second verse because it establishes that there had been a battle, resulting in a fresh kill. Then you cleverly portrayed another battle...the Dawn defeated the night. Congratulations!

Emile Pinet
Date: 10/23/2015 8:55:00 AM

Thanks Lin, your comments and words of encouragement are most welcome and appreciated. Emile.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 10/23/2015 6:19:00 AM

Congratulations on your wonderful win! Emile, guess I was not the only one who misunderstood that the words had to be exact like you and I have them. Sure would have been easier to write had I known that. I knew yours would be a top winner! #7

Emile Pinet
Date: 10/23/2015 8:50:00 AM

Thank you Connie, your comments and friendly words are always most welcome. Emile.

Jan Allison

Date: 10/23/2015 5:20:00 AM

You wove the words in so beautifully into your lovely descriptive poem - congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx

Emile Pinet
Date: 10/23/2015 8:56:00 AM

Thanks Jan, your words of encouragement are most welcome and appreciated. Emile.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 10/11/2015 5:31:00 AM

This is really a beautiful entry Emile. I think Shadow gave us some wonderful words to work with too. Outstanding my friend! #7

Emile Pinet
Date: 10/11/2015 10:08:00 AM

Thank you so much Connie, you always bring a smile to my day. Emile.

Caycay Jennings

Date: 10/3/2015 12:50:00 AM

You've done it again, Emile - you seem to wax poetic every day and in every way. You amaze me and this poem is a sure winner. I like how you choose to use 'flies', no one would have guessed. Excellent ... CayCay

Emile Pinet
Date: 10/3/2015 11:53:00 AM

Thank you CayCay, one are one of my biggest supporters and I very much appreciate it. Emile.