Emile Pinet Poet Quatrain

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Feathered Wings

A majestic golden eagle
wakens to the cool morning air.
And preens and prims its flight feathers
grooming each with diligent care.

Flies buzz over yesterday’s kill
scraps warmed by the rays of the sun.
And as night shadows disappear
darkness is defeated, dawn’s won.

A tree top branch provides a perch
from which it can survey the land.
And launching high into the sky
its territory's swiftly scanned.

Hungry fledglings flex feathered wings
stretching formidable muscles.
And the approach of their mother
is greeted by sibling tussles.

While calling and circling close by
she urges them to do their best.
And the eaglets take to the air
no longer shackled to their nest.

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Line Gauthier May 12, 2018 at 10:37 PM Beautiful, Emile. Emile Pinet May 13, 2018 at 11:22 AM Thanks Line, I appreciate your support. Emile.

Andrea Dietrich October 25, 2015 at 5:58 PM very nice. I enjoyed how you bold printed the words used. Congrats for your win. Emile Pinet October 26, 2015 at 8:16 AM Thanks Andrea, I appreciate your support. Emile.

Paul Callus October 25, 2015 at 5:21 AM A lovely and informative poem, Emile. Deservedly a winner...congratulations. // Noted Connie's comment; seems like we understood the rules differently...I thought the words had to be in the same order as set out by the sponsor; that sort of slightly tied my hands:) ~ Regards // paul Emile Pinet October 25, 2015 at 9:57 AM Thanks Paul, yes the instrutions did leave room for missinturpetaion. I appreciate the visit. Emile.

Michael Tor October 23, 2015 at 10:24 PM Emile a very informative write. Congratulations on your win. Emile Pinet October 24, 2015 at 11:13 AM Thanks Michael, I appreciate your encouragement and support. Emile.

Sara Kendrick October 23, 2015 at 2:36 PM Congrats on your eagle landing on the winners’ page..Way to go!!! Aren’t those eagles a vision of beauty..Sara Emile Pinet October 23, 2015 at 5:57 PM Thanks Sandra, I appreciate your encouragement and support. Emile.

Sandra Haight October 23, 2015 at 8:58 AM Very nice facts about our Golden Eagle brought to us so beautiful through your imagery, Emile. Congratulations on your nice win. Sandra Emile Pinet October 23, 2015 at 12:59 PM Thanks Sandra, your comments are most welcome and eagerly sought. Emile.

Lin Lane October 23, 2015 at 8:46 AM Excellent write, Emile. I especially like the second verse because it establishes that there had been a battle, resulting in a fresh kill. Then you cleverly portrayed another battle...the Dawn defeated the night. Congratulations! Emile Pinet October 23, 2015 at 8:55 AM Thanks Lin, your comments and words of encouragement are most welcome and appreciated. Emile.

Connie Marcum Wong October 23, 2015 at 6:19 AM Congratulations on your wonderful win! Emile, guess I was not the only one who misunderstood that the words had to be exact like you and I have them. Sure would have been easier to write had I known that. I knew yours would be a top winner! #7 Emile Pinet October 23, 2015 at 8:50 AM Thank you Connie, your comments and friendly words are always most welcome. Emile.

Jan Allison October 23, 2015 at 5:20 AM You wove the words in so beautifully into your lovely descriptive poem - congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx Emile Pinet October 23, 2015 at 8:56 AM Thanks Jan, your words of encouragement are most welcome and appreciated. Emile.

Connie Marcum Wong October 11, 2015 at 5:31 AM This is really a beautiful entry Emile. I think Shadow gave us some wonderful words to work with too. Outstanding my friend! #7 Emile Pinet October 11, 2015 at 10:08 AM Thank you so much Connie, you always bring a smile to my day. Emile.

CayCay Godwin October 3, 2015 at 12:50 AM You've done it again, Emile - you seem to wax poetic every day and in every way. You amaze me and this poem is a sure winner. I like how you choose to use 'flies', no one would have guessed. Excellent ... CayCay Emile Pinet October 3, 2015 at 11:53 AM Thank you CayCay, one are one of my biggest supporters and I very much appreciate it. Emile.