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Bridge

Bridge I whirl through moments etched upon my mind, Sink through midnight layers where shadows creep, Hear the rushing floods – no smooth waters find – Crumbling day light eludes vesper’s sleep. Solitude’s still waters boil – restless energy - Rushing waves clog with flotsam discarded For shores unreached – a rueful elergy - Undertows of catacombs bombarded. Shapeless forms from midnight sneer, then arise – Frantic fear flails seeing in undertows Vanishing edges but phantoms thin lies Flee as new shafts of amber light now overflow. Starshine resurrects from the hopeless night A bridge between nightmares and true sunlight.

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Date: 5/22/2020 9:10:00 AM
Sam, congratulations on your lovely sonnet. The last two lines bridge everything together. ~ Sonia
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Date: 5/21/2020 5:43:00 PM
Love your sonnet Sam. Clever with great closing couplet. Congrats on your first place finish.
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 5/22/2020 12:29:00 AM
Greg, so appreciative your message. This was a wonderful challenge with a great underlying theme. Took a little while to finish it but I do love the last couplet. Thank you. Hope you are well. All the best!
Date: 5/21/2020 2:12:00 PM
A real beauty Sam! Congratulations on your second placement! xxoo
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Date: 5/22/2020 12:26:00 AM
So glad you liked Bridge. As I have said, I loved the theme song of the contest and this poem just seemed to flow from it. Thank you so much your congratulatory message! Blessings my friend.
Date: 5/21/2020 12:10:00 AM
"Starshine resurrects from the hopeless nights"...this sonnet is beautiful in a different way altogether. Congratulations on your win Sam :)
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 5/22/2020 12:22:00 AM
Thank you Aditi. I so appreciate your visit, your congratulations and your kind words. Blessings to you.
Date: 5/20/2020 9:23:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. I love your line, "A bridge between nightmares and true sunlight." That is so true. Enjoy your win and day.......
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Date: 5/22/2020 12:10:00 AM
Hi Paula. I always appreciate your visits and your congratulations. Thank goodness nightmares end when we open our eyes in the light - a bridge. Blessings!
Date: 5/20/2020 6:40:00 PM
I don't know your placement yet, but I sure do love your sonnet! Congratulations, dear Sam!
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 5/22/2020 12:01:00 AM
Hi Andrea. It makes me happy to know you love this sonnet - you the master of sonnets! Thank you my friend. So grateful.
Date: 5/20/2020 6:08:00 PM
I love your couplet at the end. Congrats Sam.
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 5/22/2020 12:05:00 AM
Most grateful for your congrats, Jeanne. Glad you liked the ending. Wasn't sure how to end the sonnet. It came to me on a walk. Warmest wishes. Welcome back to the soup. Hope you are doing well.
Date: 5/20/2020 4:28:00 PM
Your first sonnet wins Rookie of the Year award, Sam! So happy for the well-deserved win and adulation. Are the more sonnets warming up in the on-deck circle? Hope so. Congratulations, dear friend ~ John
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 5/21/2020 11:36:00 PM
Thank you my friend. So appreciate your continued supportive messages. I think I might have another one up my sleeve sometime now that the draft is over! Blessings!
Date: 5/20/2020 3:49:00 PM
If this is your first sonnet Sam, I can't wait to see what's next!! This is impeccable writing with distinctive word selection and combinations "eludes vespers sleep" my my what a talent you have. definitely one of my new fave poets!! Congrats on a fine 2nd place in my contest!
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 5/21/2020 11:44:00 PM
John, thank you for this wonderful theme and the opportunity to try my hand at a sonnet. I am honored by your placement of Bridge - your lovely words of compliment. I love your themes. They are so inspiring. All the best to you.
Date: 5/19/2020 3:36:00 PM
Nicely done, Sam, perfect for the contest. Good luck .
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 5/21/2020 11:47:00 PM
Hi Eve! Thank you. Always grateful for your encouraging messages. Blessings to you.
Date: 5/19/2020 11:36:00 AM
A connection between bad (slumber land midnight sneer dreams and reality and sunlight ) As long as the bridge is sturdy enough to take you across and doesn't crumble- but finally 'Starlight resurrects from the restless night' Great write Sam. Jennifer.
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 5/22/2020 12:17:00 AM
This was such a wonderful theme based on one of my favorite songs. The bridge just seemed to appear out of the song. Thank you for your kind words. Blessings to you! Hope you are well.
Date: 5/19/2020 7:05:00 AM
Wow! Your concluding lines are great. Thanks for sharing this. God bless you.
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 5/21/2020 11:27:00 PM
So grateful for your visit, Beata. Thank you. Just had to end with hope at dawn. Blessings dear friend.
Date: 5/19/2020 6:19:00 AM
A bridge between nightmares and true sunlight..In rushing floods of thoughts, a feeble bridge to rely on..Great write Sam..
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Date: 5/21/2020 11:22:00 PM
It seems no matter our nightmares, morning is a bridge of hope. Grateful for your lovely words, Jenish!
Date: 5/19/2020 4:29:00 AM
Like a bridge over troubled water, your first sonnet? I'm impressed Sam, well written. Over Fork Over Tom
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 5/21/2020 11:56:00 PM
This was the first, Tom! It was a wonderful theme that provided the opportunity to try my hand at this most traditional form of poetry. Thank you for your always encouraging words. Blessings. Over Fork Over.
Date: 5/18/2020 10:31:00 PM
I do believe this is your first sonnet on Soup, my dear Samwise! A delightfully dark one, exploring the caverns and catacombs of the nighttime mind! Love your spooky images and the metaphor of the bridge as the connection between reality and the netherworld of the subconscious, and ending with the hopeful sunlight. Well done, and best wishes in the Bridge contest, my friend! ~ John
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 5/18/2020 10:57:00 PM
You are correct - it is my first. I loved the theme based on Bridge Over Troubled Water. I think I like your assessment better than my sonnet! You nailed it - per usual - my friend - right in the catcher's mitt! Thanks so much for your good wishes! Grace and peace to you my friend!

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