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* This was written for a contest, with the requirement that it be from the future bride to her groom. * My Darling ... you are the sentinel of my soul and The keeper of the keys to my heart! You are the Arrow sent forth from the bow of the heavens to Pierce my spirit with love everlasting! Oh, how the Sun blushes each morn in reverence of your smile! How the moon wistfully pales with the knowledge That my nights are now yours - complete, passionate, And sublime! With each warming summer rain, the Sky itself weeps with envy, that it no longer holds Your favor as I do! My precious love, I give to you Now in wedlock, the hand that was created to meld With yours - the space between each finger meant For the grasp of thine, just as each star was meant For its place in the sky - as perfect, as shimmering, And as eternal! Let us go forth into Life as the pillars Of a shrine - each in its own strength, but together, Stronger still. Let me swim up the river of your spirit And dance with you on the shores of wonder ... give Me the honor and blessing of shaping your smile, of Being the bright of your days and the comfort of your Nights! Allow me the bounty of bearing our children, And kissing away your tears! But most of all, let us Embrace the joys and sorrows of life as ONE, from The morning of our lives together, to the setting sun Of our later years. I pledge all that I am and believe, To the magnificent man I know you shall always be ... My dear, precious Love!

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Date: 10/8/2017 12:22:00 AM
Wow, just wow Greg, you know what I think about your work, contests aside this is class work, shake it off, I just got a big fat NA also cest la vie!
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 10/8/2017 12:28:00 AM
Oh, so sorry, Buddy - no biggie here, I was goofing with another souper about how it all comes down to personal preference and what the judge is looking for, and not always quality - they bet me a poem that this would place, so there's one coming that will have a dedication for me, ha!
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 10/8/2017 12:28:00 AM
As always, thanks for your support, my friend, I would seriously be lost around here without your friendship and counseling! Blessings, Brother! :-)
Date: 10/5/2017 11:02:00 AM
God certainly blessed you with some poetic talent "Gregory" - A wonderful heartfelt write . . .
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 10/5/2017 10:54:00 PM
Gregory is my real name, Indiana, but you can call me "Greg" as all my friends do - this was written for a contest, (The Bride To Her Future Groom Contest), so it HAD to be from the bride to groom, and had to match the one already written by the sponsor. :-)
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 10/5/2017 10:48:00 PM
That's very kind of you, Indiana, thank you! I think we're all just tools for Him - or conduits for the Creative Conscience - but I am thankful to be used in such a way. Blessings to you, my friend - and thanks again for the kind words! :-) <3
Date: 10/4/2017 6:07:00 AM
This is such a beautiful write Greg! I surely loved reading this enlightening poem this morning! Your poem is written in such a way that I am in awe of its splendor my friend! I can feel the love between the bride and groom, stronger than ever, and ready for the future! What a fantastic piece, Great Work!!
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 10/4/2017 11:26:00 PM
Very kind of you, my friend, thank you so much for this wonderful comment - blessings, Russell! :-)
Date: 10/2/2017 9:33:00 PM
Brilliant, Gregory, good luck in the contest :-)
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 10/7/2017 6:05:00 PM
Didn't even PLACE, Eve ... I'm stunned, I must say.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 10/2/2017 10:10:00 PM
Thank you so much, Eve!

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