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From my Thanksgiving in Chicago

brevity 1 branches frame window reminiscent of trees slowly dawning in a dark shadowed forest haiku 1 ivy vines hang down from the ceiling's blackened beam reflection in glass haiku 2 tangled trees like webs in front of city windows wind whispers secrets

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Date: 12/24/2016 1:36:00 PM
True, all three paint different scenes, but they are generally related to natural beauty. That's what I love most in these haikus.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/24/2016 2:26:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 12/13/2016 12:14:00 PM
One of your masterpiece. I love these Haikus. 7
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/13/2016 3:59:00 PM
Thanks so much, Afzal!
Date: 11/29/2016 6:59:00 AM
Love this!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/29/2016 7:00:00 AM
Thank you, Mike!
Date: 11/28/2016 8:55:00 PM
I love these! Especially 'wind whispers secrets' Excellent!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/29/2016 7:01:00 AM
Thank you, Rick!
Date: 11/28/2016 2:02:00 PM
Two haikus of vivid description. A very enjoyable read, indeed.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/28/2016 8:46:00 PM
Thank you, Janet!
Date: 11/28/2016 1:46:00 PM
All three are nice Kim, each painting a different scene.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/28/2016 8:46:00 PM
Thank you, Chris!
Date: 11/28/2016 1:45:00 PM
such beautiful haiku Kim:-) hugs jan xx
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/28/2016 8:47:00 PM
Thank you, Jan!