Brenda

Brenda broke down
     in big baleful tears
       breaking a blue vase.
          Bob was dead,
             her beloved Bob, the boatman!
Oh, bittersweet the
     book ending.
       All through the balmy, blazing summer
she had written from her bleeding pen
of bliss beyond her boring life.
     Under blue moons
       Bob, kissed her . . . 
She was Brenda, the beautiful
     belle in her book.
She still felt his last blood-stained kisses
on her body, her lips, her bosom.
Boundless her desire!
     Oh, broken sad dreams
       of Bob
          her fictional boatman love!


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October 1, 2016

Free Verse/Brenda
Copyright Protected, ID 834757

Submitted to the contest, Any HM Ever
Sponsor, Laura Loo (March 30, 2017)

First Place
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(Submitted to the contest, Brenda, October 2016, HM)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Merryman Avatar
April 14, 2017 at 10:40 PM
A wonderful write, Constance! Full of emotion and I really like the alliteration. Congrats on your 1st place win! Blessings, Kim
Scars Avatar
April 4, 2017 at 6:03 PM
love the alliteration sweet lady..you have such a gift in that beautiful pen of yours! congrats and thank you :)-luloo
Haight Avatar
October 11, 2016 at 4:18 PM
I enjoyed your fine alliteration and sad storyline, Constance. Yours is one of my favorites. Congratulations on your placement. 7 Hugs, Sandra
Scars Avatar
October 11, 2016 at 8:41 AM
Broken Wings- bravo for Brenda! congrats on your placement :)-luloo
Capitano Avatar
October 1, 2016 at 9:50 AM
Great job!!! < (alliterating exclamation marks, lol) Good luck in the contest.
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