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Breeze of May

cool wind seeks asylum in spirit trees faeries wait to share secrets galore may fifteenth has never seen such a breeze tantalizing truths smeared oak's magic door gust blows elves into the forevermore snickering brownies hide beyond gray bark hear gentle sound of a sage meadowlark cool wind breezes through with apt melody was that an angel? Did you hear a hark? I feel blessed to have you my pleasant tree Written 5-15-2020 Contest: Dizain Sponsor: Dear Heart Checked syllables with www.howmanysyllables.com

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Date: 5/22/2020 7:43:00 AM
Caren, wonderfully penned and -congratulations on your win in my contest_Constance
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 5/22/2020 7:50:00 AM
Thank you Constance
Date: 5/21/2020 1:53:00 AM
I am happy to see this on the winners list Caren. I am back to congratulate you on your wonderful win! Blessings. xxoo
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 5/21/2020 5:30:00 PM
Thank you Connie. I was pretty thrilled.
Date: 5/19/2020 11:57:00 PM
What a beautiful imagery of the onset of May. Congratulations on your win Caren :)
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 5/20/2020 9:53:00 AM
Thank you. It was a fantastic challenge for me.
Date: 5/19/2020 10:23:00 PM
Such a spellbinding write, Caren, congratulations on placing in the contest!
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 5/20/2020 9:54:00 AM
Thank you Michelle.
Date: 5/19/2020 2:12:00 PM
Totally enchanting, Caren. You weave a "faerie" spell in your dizain drawing us into your magic! Congratulations! Thank you for reminding us there is still magic in this world IF we will only open our eyes to it.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 5/19/2020 3:51:00 PM
Thank you Sam. I am so glad that you liked it.
Date: 5/18/2020 5:14:00 AM
A beautiful Dizain you have written Caren! This should be a top winner! Have a great week. Blessings xxoo
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 5/19/2020 1:09:00 AM
Thank you Connie. I love a challenge like this to try a new style of poetry.
Date: 5/15/2020 8:43:00 AM
This is wonderful Caren! Enjoyed :))) xomo
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 5/15/2020 7:26:00 PM
Thank you Maureen. I love your stage name!

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