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Breathless, Oh

To slow dance into night with a new love, anticipation building all the while! To look into your darling’s eyes and see the adoration that you strongly feel reflected back, for you too are adored, and barely can you breathe it feels so good! Romance has budded sweetly like a rose. Its scent is pure delight, and petal-soft will be the kiss that you’ve been dreaming of. Your fingers interlace. A thrill divine goes down your spine, and tiny butterflies are all aflutter in your stomach as you gaze into the eyes of your amor. Your love - so fresh - like snow that no one yet has tread upon; your prints will be the first! There's nothing like it; never will there be a thing so beautiful as this first love. You're both alone beneath a starry sky. You lean in for that magical first kiss. There’s nothing else but bliss in all the world, and breathless, oh, you’re soaring to the moon! Dec. 28, 2021 using theme Breathless Now for A Strand (1057) Poetry Contest

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Date: 1/24/2022 11:54:00 AM
I have read your work that is on the winners' list and find it worthy of the placement. Congrats..Sara..As I am reading this there is a instrumental on TV "Save The Last Dance For Me"..
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Date: 1/24/2022 5:44:00 AM
Andrea, this was a delight to read! So emotive, you were able to draw the reader into the rising joy of the moment. Beautiful! Congrats on your win in Brian's contest! Blessings, Kim M
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Date: 1/23/2022 6:59:00 AM
Coming back to congratulate you. Congratulations!
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Date: 1/20/2022 11:07:00 AM
Andrea, congratulations on your Second Place win in my B Forms contest with your wonderful poem ~Constance
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Date: 1/11/2022 5:50:00 PM
Falling in love ~ does anything else compare? Your poem describes that wonderful feeling perfectly. Congratulations on your big win :)
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Date: 1/10/2022 8:25:00 PM
A great poem in blank verse form. Indeed, breathless! Congratulations!
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Date: 1/10/2022 5:17:00 PM
Congratulations on your superb well-deserved win, Andrea. You penned an exquisite poem full of great thoughts metaphors.
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Date: 1/4/2022 11:03:00 AM
A first love, what an ecstatic feeling - beautiful Andrea, I hope your Christmas was happy and blessed and that this year will be one of your best. You are a wonderful poet and friend, this is a winner for certain. Have been away and only able to submit one poem during our holiday, Love and hugs Jennifer.
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Date: 12/29/2021 12:48:00 AM
Imagery, emotions and perfect iambics. Definitely the number one in the contest. Best for a win. Hugs.
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Date: 12/28/2021 8:16:00 PM
To love and be loved, such a joy! Excellent write! Joe.
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Date: 12/28/2021 7:50:00 PM
Very nice Andrea, first new love and new snow. The ending is great.
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Date: 12/28/2021 10:56:00 AM
Well written poem of love. Anticipation held my heart throughout. Good luck in the contest, Andrea. Your friend in Texas, Bill
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Date: 12/28/2021 10:45:00 AM
You never forget those special kisses. Happy New year Andrea. Tom
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Date: 12/28/2021 9:38:00 AM
Andrea, Gorgeous poem with a kiss. Is it possible to forget how to do it? Noses always seem to get in the way. Perhaps a joke from the creator. Best wishes for you and your family in the new year. -Richard
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 12/28/2021 9:40:00 AM
my first good kisser did eskimo and butterfly kisses as warm up to the best part!!

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