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Breathless

The steamy breathlessness of unending youthful love Reckless plunges into cryogenic mountain lakes The sound of brightly shining stars beyond the Trevi Eternal love embraced in kiss of shimmering gold Golden glow of dying sun on white Aegean walls Among first sights and sounds that once took away my breath And yet, you leave me breathless still Writing Challenge - B Word Poetry Contest, placed 2nd Sponsored by: Constance La France Date wrote: 30th January 2023

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Constance La France

Date: 2/4/2023 7:40:00 AM

Terry, a lovely poem and congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge B Words, well done, Constance

Terry Miller
Date: 6/7/2023 4:20:00 AM

Thank you Constance and apologies for a very delayed response it has been a turbulent few months.

Fj Thomas

Date: 2/1/2023 4:25:00 PM

How could one ever leave from such a place. I could only imagine such beauty Terry.

Terry Miller
Date: 6/7/2023 4:21:00 AM

Thank you for your kind comments.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/1/2023 2:06:00 PM

Way to go with this winner. Great Congratulations for you. Sara

Terry Miller
Date: 6/7/2023 4:21:00 AM

Thank you, Sara, and apologies for a very delayed response; it has been a turbulent few months.

Hat Bueckert

Date: 2/1/2023 1:57:00 PM

Beautifully describing the indescribable, congrats Terry!

Terry Miller
Date: 6/7/2023 4:21:00 AM

Thank you so much.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 2/1/2023 8:30:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. What a lovely write/story. Have a blessed day..........

Terry Miller
Date: 6/7/2023 4:22:00 AM

Thank you Paula.

Sotto Poet

Date: 2/1/2023 5:33:00 AM

Terrific poetry, Terry; the beauty of nature leaves one unable to breathe. Congratulations on your win.

Terry Miller
Date: 6/7/2023 4:22:00 AM

thank you so much I always appreciate your comments, and apologies for the very delayed response; it has been a turbulent few months.

Eve Roper

Date: 1/31/2023 5:34:00 PM

Breathless is the scenery of nature, great verse, Terry. Good luck in Constance's contest. Blessings

Terry Miller
Date: 6/7/2023 4:23:00 AM

Thank you Eve.

Joanna Daniel

Date: 1/31/2023 3:19:00 AM

A well constructed poem, Terry:)

Terry Miller
Date: 6/7/2023 4:23:00 AM

Thank you so very much.