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Breathless

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Writing Challenge - B Word Poetry Contest, placed 2nd
Sponsored by: Constance La France 
Date wrote: 30th January 2023

The steamy breathlessness of unending youthful love Reckless plunges into cryogenic mountain lakes The sound of brightly shining stars beyond the Trevi Eternal love embraced in kiss of shimmering gold Golden glow of dying sun on white Aegean walls Among first sights and sounds that once took away my breath And yet, you leave me breathless still

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Constance La France
Date: 2/4/2023 7:40:00 AM
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Terry, a lovely poem and congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge B Words, well done, Constance
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Terry Miller
Date: 6/7/2023 4:20:00 AM
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Thank you Constance and apologies for a very delayed response it has been a turbulent few months.
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FJ Thomas
Date: 2/1/2023 4:25:00 PM
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How could one ever leave from such a place. I could only imagine such beauty Terry.
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Terry Miller
Date: 6/7/2023 4:21:00 AM
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Thank you for your kind comments.
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/1/2023 2:06:00 PM
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Way to go with this winner. Great Congratulations for you. Sara
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Terry Miller
Date: 6/7/2023 4:21:00 AM
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Thank you, Sara, and apologies for a very delayed response; it has been a turbulent few months.
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Hat Bueckert
Date: 2/1/2023 1:57:00 PM
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Beautifully describing the indescribable, congrats Terry!
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Terry Miller
Date: 6/7/2023 4:21:00 AM
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Thank you so much.
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 2/1/2023 8:30:00 AM
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Congratulations on your win. What a lovely write/story. Have a blessed day..........
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Terry Miller
Date: 6/7/2023 4:22:00 AM
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Thank you Paula.
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Date: 2/1/2023 5:33:00 AM
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Terrific poetry, Terry; the beauty of nature leaves one unable to breathe. Congratulations on your win.
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Terry Miller
Date: 6/7/2023 4:22:00 AM
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thank you so much I always appreciate your comments, and apologies for the very delayed response; it has been a turbulent few months.
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Eve Roper
Date: 1/31/2023 5:34:00 PM
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Breathless is the scenery of nature, great verse, Terry. Good luck in Constance's contest. Blessings
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Terry Miller
Date: 6/7/2023 4:23:00 AM
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Thank you Eve.
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Joanna Daniel
Date: 1/31/2023 3:19:00 AM
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A well constructed poem, Terry:)
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Terry Miller
Date: 6/7/2023 4:23:00 AM
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Thank you so very much.

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