Breathing Dreams

Back with congrats to you. Way to go. Sara K. ⭐

Stunning imagery dear Hiya. Congratulations! :)

- Congratulations, Hiya ... a poem with beautiful well-chosen words :) - hugs

Congratulations! … Draping stelliform-soul in strokes of starlight which drizzle as lemon drops upon pink sheet- canvas

Congratulations on your win, Hiya! Yours did shape very well, so beautifully done!

Forever breathing dreams! I absolutely love this double etheree! The kind of etheree that i would appreciate! Your use of colors and words that truly connect with me is beyond impressive and impeccable! I love the opening! And how you’ve painted imagery in such a descriptive manner! And theres so many lines in this that made me choose this as a winner! Whilst sticking to syllables you’ve really delivered a very creative take! I remember you used to say you cant do forms! Now look at you! Congratulations

Beautiful work, Hiya. I loved reading it.

Wow! This is excellent. Well done :)

Etheree always take on the classiest shapes. Very deeply rich in descriptive lines. Thanks for sharing this one with us and for dropping by my page. Sara

Looooooove these images and colors. This is a fav.

wow seems like you digested the dictionary and inhaled God's grace too lol, love this, lets talk soon :)

Just love this. Beautiful. God bless you, much love, Gina

A colourful write with artistic embellishments that makes this unique, so much said in such a short form, brilliant, Hiya, the title itself is captivating:)

Breathing dreams can take so many forms. Your imagery shines. Enjoyed reading.

Dream on! Hiya. Your dreams take many forms, all transform into eloquent poetry, my friend. Your imagery is priceless. Thanks for sharing your thoughts with us through your vivid poetry. A poet friend in Texas, Bill

Nice forward and backward Etheree. Lots of imagery and metaphors.

Loved this Etheree. So much vision in such a short poem. Blessings.

This stands apart from all etherees I have hither to read....in an excellent way. The very opening line captures our attention when 'with kohl ink you begin to sketch musky infernos'. After reading your poems when I read your comments praising my poems, honestly I feel how undeserving I am to gloat over those words. I know you are writing hollow words (?) with a good intention to boost the confidence of a fellow poet. For that I am grateful to you gifted poet....

Hiya, your writing skillfully captures the ethereal nature of dreams. Your poem is a work of art, adorned with insightful metaphors that transport the reader to another realm. It is like a harmonious composition, woven with intricate words that elevate the piece to excellence, a fave for me for its uniqueness.

musky infernos with kohl ink--copper blue lashes and ripples---in strokes of starlight which drizzle as lemon drops--as magenta peony-bows in maroon hair-strings, forever breathing dreams--WOW! A symphony of words in ornate vocabulary. Excellent as always, Hiya.