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Breathing Dreams

I sketch musky infernos with kohl ink when dead wings of flurry moon lace my copper blue lashes and ripples of faith crash furthest seashores, Draping stelliform-soul in strokes of starlight which drizzle as lemon drops upon pink sheet- canvas, So when red letters twirl like blood stained cranberries, rose-gold amulets will always save the salted flesh of sun and wildflowers shall shine as magenta peony-bows in maroon hair-strings, forever breathing dreams.

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Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 10/12/2023 7:54:00 AM

Stunning imagery dear Hiya. Congratulations! :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/11/2023 10:56:00 AM

- Congratulations, Hiya ... a poem with beautiful well-chosen words :) - hugs

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 10/11/2023 10:40:00 AM

Congratulations! … Draping stelliform-soul in strokes of starlight which drizzle as lemon drops upon pink sheet- canvas

I Am Anaya

Date: 10/11/2023 9:01:00 AM

Congratulations on your win, Hiya! Yours did shape very well, so beautifully done!

Ink Empress

Date: 10/11/2023 8:39:00 AM

Forever breathing dreams! I absolutely love this double etheree! The kind of etheree that i would appreciate! Your use of colors and words that truly connect with me is beyond impressive and impeccable! I love the opening! And how you’ve painted imagery in such a descriptive manner! And theres so many lines in this that made me choose this as a winner! Whilst sticking to syllables you’ve really delivered a very creative take! I remember you used to say you cant do forms! Now look at you! Congratulations

Paige Hind

Date: 10/6/2023 10:25:00 AM

Beautiful work, Hiya. I loved reading it.

Heidi Sands

Date: 10/5/2023 6:07:00 AM

Wow! This is excellent. Well done :)

Hiya Sharma
Date: 10/6/2023 5:25:00 AM

Thank you so much dear Heidi, I'm so happy that you enjoyed reading this :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/5/2023 4:08:00 AM

Etheree always take on the classiest shapes. Very deeply rich in descriptive lines. Thanks for sharing this one with us and for dropping by my page. Sara

Hiya Sharma
Date: 10/6/2023 5:24:00 AM

Yes they do! I love writing etheree poems.. And am so glad that you enjoyed reading this one! Means a lot to me, dear Sara, sending love :)

Karen Jones

Date: 10/5/2023 3:20:00 AM

Looooooove these images and colors. This is a fav.

Hiya Sharma
Date: 10/5/2023 9:05:00 PM

Awwn, thank you so much for the fav, dear! I'm so glad that you enjoyed reading my poem, means a lot! Sending love and light :)

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 10/5/2023 3:00:00 AM

wow seems like you digested the dictionary and inhaled God's grace too lol, love this, lets talk soon :)

Hiya Sharma
Date: 10/5/2023 9:04:00 PM

Ahh, haha lol, you're so sweet, thank you so much for these lovely words and I'm so glad that you enjoyed reading my poem.. And yes sure, let's talk sometime on soupmail :)

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 10/4/2023 12:14:00 AM

Just love this. Beautiful. God bless you, much love, Gina

Hiya Sharma
Date: 10/5/2023 9:03:00 PM

Thank you so much dear gorgeous Gina, I'm grateful for your beautiful support always, sending love :)

Joanna Daniel

Date: 10/3/2023 6:33:00 PM

A colourful write with artistic embellishments that makes this unique, so much said in such a short form, brilliant, Hiya, the title itself is captivating:)

Hiya Sharma
Date: 10/5/2023 9:02:00 PM

Awwn, thank you so much dear Joanna, your words are so gorgeous and mesmerizing themselves, I'm grateful to receive such beautiful feedback from you, means a lot, sending love :)

Eve Roper

Date: 10/3/2023 3:56:00 PM

Breathing dreams can take so many forms. Your imagery shines. Enjoyed reading.

Hiya Sharma
Date: 10/5/2023 7:24:00 AM

Thank you so much for your lovely comment, beautiful soul! Indeed dreams can take many forms.. I'm very grateful for your kind words, sending love and light :)

Bill Baker

Date: 10/3/2023 2:38:00 PM

Dream on! Hiya. Your dreams take many forms, all transform into eloquent poetry, my friend. Your imagery is priceless. Thanks for sharing your thoughts with us through your vivid poetry. A poet friend in Texas, Bill

Hiya Sharma
Date: 10/5/2023 7:23:00 AM

Thank you so much Bill, I truly treasure your precious words of kindness.. I'm so glad that you enjoyed reading my poem and could feel its essence. Appreciate your beautiful support always, sending light and best wishes :)

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 10/2/2023 1:44:00 PM

I appreciate the imagery as well as the metaphors in your Etheree. I think that type of poetry has an aesthetic appeal...yours was magnificent! enjoy your evening, Sara

Hiya Sharma
Date: 10/5/2023 6:22:00 AM

Yes indeed, I love writing Etheree poems, they are so beautiful! Your words are so precious and I'm so glad that you enjoyed reading this, dear Sara.. You're one stunning poetess & I learn so much from you as well. Sending love and light :)

Jay Narain

Date: 10/2/2023 10:23:00 AM

Nice forward and backward Etheree. Lots of imagery and metaphors.

Hiya Sharma
Date: 10/5/2023 6:20:00 AM

Thank you so much for your very kind and generous words. I'm so happy that you enjoyed reading my etheree poem~ regards!

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 10/2/2023 8:30:00 AM

Loved this Etheree. So much vision in such a short poem. Blessings.

Hiya Sharma
Date: 10/5/2023 6:19:00 AM

Thank you so much for reading, Victor. I'm so glad that you enjoyed reading my etheree poem, means a lot :)

Valsa George

Date: 10/2/2023 6:37:00 AM

This stands apart from all etherees I have hither to read....in an excellent way. The very opening line captures our attention when 'with kohl ink you begin to sketch musky infernos'. After reading your poems when I read your comments praising my poems, honestly I feel how undeserving I am to gloat over those words. I know you are writing hollow words (?) with a good intention to boost the confidence of a fellow poet. For that I am grateful to you gifted poet....

Hiya Sharma
Date: 10/5/2023 6:18:00 AM

Awwn, dear poetess, you're seriously too kind to honour me with such heavy and glorious words of praise! I'm just a budding poet, 18 years old, & I've so much to learn from you all.. I really enjoy exploring new things and especially learning from everyone's artistic skills. And you're honestly, one of my most favourite poetesses! Im really blessed to have found such supportive souls here on PoetrySoup who gift me so much with their kindness and encouragement, I'm always grateful to you :)

Tom Woody

Date: 10/2/2023 6:28:00 AM

Forever breathing dreams... what a great notion. And you will no doubt continue breathing colorful sweet poetry too dear Hiya. Thx for sticking this out with us here on dysfunctional Poetry Soup. You and inky and pals are a much needed breath of fresh air

Hiya Sharma
Date: 10/5/2023 6:15:00 AM

Awwn, thank you so much for your sweet words dear Tom, I'm enjoying my time on PoetrySoup and I'm grateful to Ink for introducing this place to me & I'm very grateful to you as well for your support since the beginning..true, dysfunctionality can be found everywhere, we need to stay positive, and have confidence & faith :) I hope and wish that the aura here stays bright and lets us keep believing in the magic of kind words, otherwise darkness is to be found everywhere..

Sotto Poet

Date: 10/2/2023 5:59:00 AM

Hiya, your writing skillfully captures the ethereal nature of dreams. Your poem is a work of art, adorned with insightful metaphors that transport the reader to another realm. It is like a harmonious composition, woven with intricate words that elevate the piece to excellence, a fave for me for its uniqueness.

Hiya Sharma
Date: 10/5/2023 6:09:00 AM

Thank you so much for reading my etheree and coming up with such a kind feedback, I'm grateful for your generous words, always.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 10/2/2023 5:31:00 AM

musky infernos with kohl ink--copper blue lashes and ripples---in strokes of starlight which drizzle as lemon drops--as magenta peony-bows in maroon hair-strings, forever breathing dreams--WOW! A symphony of words in ornate vocabulary. Excellent as always, Hiya.

Hiya Sharma
Date: 10/5/2023 6:08:00 AM

Thank you so much for your extremely kind and generous words, means a lot to me especially coming from a brilliant poet like yourself~ I'm so glad that you liked reading this, appreciate your beautiful feedback, - regards!! :)