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Breathe

Breathe in a memory as I Remember how you said I love You with a murmur Each of us did not utter a sound A sigh is all we could do The moments almost collided Hello he said with a gasp Edward are you OK I said with a whisper Date Written:4/27/2021 4 Place Breathe Writing Prompt - Breathe - Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Constance La France

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Constance La France

Date: 5/11/2021 5:13:00 PM

Paula, congratulations on your win in my Writing Prompt - Breathe - Challenge with, well done, love _Constance

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/14/2021 4:00:00 PM

Thank You, for writing and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have a win in your wonderful contest. Glad you like my breathe acrostic write. I enjoyed writing it. Have a blessed day/weekend with hugs........................

Unseeking Seeker

Date: 5/9/2021 8:38:00 PM

Superbly written Acrostic! Congrats on your win, Paula!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/10/2021 8:58:00 AM

Thank You, for writing and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have a win. Glad you like my breathe acrostic write. Have a blessed day...........................

Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 4/28/2021 1:17:00 PM

Very touching, Paula. Those moments are unforgettable! You have used acrostic form beautifully. Love ~ Mala

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 4/29/2021 7:53:00 AM

Thank You, for writing and for your kind words. Glad you enjoyed this acrostic write. Have a blessed day................

Line Gauthier

Date: 4/27/2021 7:46:00 PM

moving ~ well done

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 4/28/2021 8:47:00 AM

Thank You, for writing. Glad you like this write. Have a blessed day....................

Robert Pettit

Date: 4/27/2021 1:21:00 PM

Very nicely written.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 4/27/2021 2:06:00 PM

Thank You, for writing. Glad you like my Breathe write. Have a blessed day....................

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 4/27/2021 9:18:00 AM

A lovely memory Paula, no one forgets that intake of breath the moment those words “I love you” are said. Fantastic acrostic... Belle

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 4/27/2021 11:09:00 AM

Thank You, for writing. Glad you enjoyed it. Have a blessed day....................