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they say to mend an injured heart, move on and thus I've done so, time-and-time- again but though your smile, from me, is decades gone my dreams still find you haunting me, as then I've always held your heart, pristine and rare soft-pressed between life's pages like a rose and as the timeworn leaves may fade and tear that weather on love's blossom never shows I've tried so to forget you through the years still, twilight slumber finds my heart exposed and tho' I cleansed those memories with tears your phantoms keep returning, unopposed you took my breath quite often in the past and I've no doubt you'll take ... my very last.

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Date: 12/30/2021 4:56:00 PM
Exquisite rhythm and rhyme filled with beautiful metaphors that bring your message home to the heart!!! You are an amazing poet.
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Date: 8/6/2019 7:33:00 AM
I viewed your post on Facebook and came to have a look. I am not disappointed.
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Date: 1/1/2019 1:25:00 PM
Wowsa another great poem, Gregory. A FAVE for me. Congrats on your win.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 2/9/2019 8:34:00 PM
Many kind thank-you's to you, Line, I so greatly appreciate it! :-) <3
Date: 12/27/2018 9:09:00 PM
A brilliant and beautiful garden of words.. spreading fragrance of incomplete love... lovely Sonnet ..was a pleasure to read...
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 2/9/2019 8:34:00 PM
What a wonderful comment, Debjani - thank you so very much for liking my poem! Blessings, my friend! :-) <3
Date: 12/25/2018 4:39:00 AM
It seems she is unforgettable, Gregory. You truly have a talent for writing perfect sonnets. Congratulations on your win in Mark's contest and have a Merry Christmas, Carolyn
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 2/9/2019 8:33:00 PM
Thanks so very much, Carolyn, I'm so pleased you enjoyed this one! Blessings to you, my friend! :-) <3
Date: 12/24/2018 11:43:00 AM
Truly Shakespearean in perfect form and dripping with romance and longing.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 2/9/2019 8:32:00 PM
This means a lot to me, Craig, and I thank you so much for the wonderful comments! Blessings, my friend! :-)
Date: 12/24/2018 11:42:00 AM
Congratulations Greg on your win, another beautiful poem as usual.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 2/9/2019 8:31:00 PM
That's very kind of you, Wren, thanks so much! :-)
Date: 12/24/2018 11:38:00 AM
Greg, congrats on your win on Mile 2 of my 2019 Poetry Marathon contest. Those last two lines are so full of emotion! ~Mark
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 2/9/2019 8:31:00 PM
Many kind thanks, Mark, I so appreciate the placement and kind comments ... this is a special one for me. Blessings! :-)
Date: 12/24/2018 10:35:00 AM
I'm back to say CONGRATS! Janice
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 2/9/2019 8:30:00 PM
Thank you very much, Janice! :-) <3
Date: 9/7/2018 6:42:00 PM
Beautiful, Greg. For some of us, there will always be that "one" that returns to us in our dreams and sweet memories. If the love is true, it sticks like glue.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 9/7/2018 7:00:00 PM
Thank you so much, Carole, I greatly appreciate the kind words! You are so right ... true love never dies, and while it doesn't always stay united physically, emotionally those connections NEVER sever. Blessings, friend! :-) <3
Date: 8/24/2018 8:29:00 PM
Even better second read, congrats on another best top 100, you're on a roll! Congrats also on another double win!
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 8/27/2018 1:37:00 AM
Thank you so much, John, I greatly appreciate your kind comments! (It didn't last on the top 100, but I am very pleased with the comments and ANY placement on that list!). Blessings, my friend! :-)
Date: 8/24/2018 12:42:00 PM
Boy, Greg, can I relate to this poem!
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 8/27/2018 1:35:00 AM
Thank you so much, LJ ... I'm sorry you are "haunted" as well. The heart never heals, it seems ... peace and blessings, my friend! :-)
Date: 8/15/2018 9:37:00 AM
A very well written sonnet. It is so full of imagery. Well deserving of first place in both contest.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 8/16/2018 3:29:00 AM
Thank you so much, Charles, I greatly appreciate the kind words, my friend! :-)
Date: 8/13/2018 10:31:00 PM
Oh my!! These last two lines move me, they take my breath. Your emotions tangle around each and every word. It's like I want to hold them close. They feel so real to me. I can see why this was chosen as winner. Congratulations. A favorite for me. ~ Brandy
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 8/13/2018 11:03:00 PM
I'm so pleased you liked this one, Brandy, thank you very much for the kind words! Ironic, as this is about the same person that the other one was, and I was in a similar state-of-mind when I wrote both of them ... kinda cool that you gravitated to them. Blessings, friend! :-)
Date: 8/11/2018 9:10:00 AM
Back with more congrats, Gregory.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 8/13/2018 4:54:00 AM
Thank you so much, Line! :-)
Date: 8/8/2018 8:08:00 AM
Congratulations on your win! :)
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 8/10/2018 6:26:00 PM
Thank you, Susan! :-)
Date: 8/7/2018 12:28:00 PM
...and mo love! <3
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 8/7/2018 4:05:00 PM
Thank you, Mo! :-) <3
Date: 8/7/2018 7:05:00 AM
congratulations on your win. Faux
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 8/7/2018 4:04:00 PM
Thanks so much, Faux, I greatly appreciate it! :-)
Date: 8/6/2018 3:34:00 PM
Such a magnificent Sonnet, Greg. The sadness you express so deeply with such feeling with your well-chosen words and perfect form, leave me breathless. Congratulations on your two wonderful placements...First Place Trophy win and shared First Place. Well-done! Sandra :)
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Date: 8/6/2018 6:05:00 PM
What a wonderful comment, Sandra ... you are always so kind to me, and so heartfelt with your words, and I am so thankful for both! Blessings, my friend! :-) <3
Date: 8/6/2018 2:51:00 PM
Wow, an awesome leave-you-breathless poem, Gregory. A FAVE for me.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 8/6/2018 6:03:00 PM
That's very sweet of you, Line, thanks so much! I'm really glad you enjoyed this one! :-) <3
Date: 8/6/2018 2:29:00 PM
Congrats on another win with this moving piece Greg. You already know how much I loved it. :-)
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 8/6/2018 6:02:00 PM
That's very sweet of you, Connie, and I thank you so much, friend! :-) <3
Date: 8/6/2018 2:14:00 PM
This brought tears to my eyes. Lovely poem. Congrats!
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 8/6/2018 6:01:00 PM
I'm so pleased it touched your heart, Francesca - thank you so much for the kind words! :-) <3
Date: 8/6/2018 12:25:00 PM
Great write Gregory, congratulations...
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 8/6/2018 6:00:00 PM
Thank you so much, Charlie! :-)
Date: 8/6/2018 8:38:00 AM
I can see why this relieved top honour. Congrats on your win.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 8/6/2018 6:00:00 PM
Thank you very much, Richard, I greatly appreciate it, my friend!
Date: 8/6/2018 8:13:00 AM
This was such a superb sonnet. You've woven a deeply moving story with such a fluid narrative. I was captivated from the first to last word.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 8/6/2018 5:59:00 PM
That's very kind of you, Jesse, and I thank you so much ... blessings, friend! :-)
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