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Breaking the Innocence

Teasing with naughty whispers and wet is his jean
naïve and closed he’s definitely a virgin
her dance moves hit his head like jin
same game always, his reaction never starts aging
between a good boy and a bad guy is a lean margin
he’s shy, yet the temptation is urging
it’s just a game to test the might of his gene
the mind says no but eyes never stop bulging
initially a joke which now kicks starts the engine
fast events pass making her continuously scream Eugene!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018


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Date: 5/27/2018 1:44:00 PM
Clever Funom. Love how you dance with your words.
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Date: 5/22/2018 7:24:00 AM
Funom, oh so sexy ~
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Date: 5/20/2018 7:45:00 PM
Beautiful
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Date: 5/3/2018 7:21:00 PM
passionate picture. Each of us owes it to LIFE to experience something passionate. My prayer is that no one gets hurt. shalom, shalom!
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Date: 4/29/2018 7:53:00 PM
Eugene is in Oregon right now. He was a turbulent teen while wearing his jean never knowing what he may mean from this until next scene that started out so serene and now we understand what he does mean to be a poet with imagination and eyes that are keen.
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Funom Makama
Date: 4/30/2018 8:30:00 AM
woooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooaaaaaaaaaaah! Just publish this as a part II... Thank you so much for this wonderful comment so descriptive
Date: 4/29/2018 6:27:00 AM
Nice write. The words perfectly describes the picture.
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Funom Makama
Date: 4/30/2018 8:29:00 AM
Thank you so much Samuel
Date: 4/28/2018 12:28:00 PM
A very provocative prose as you can the young man in the photo who is experiencing raging hormones. WELL DONE, FUNOM!
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Funom Makama
Date: 4/30/2018 8:29:00 AM
Hahahahaha.... Yeah, you are so right Ralph
Date: 4/28/2018 8:40:00 AM
Hello Funom, A very racy, interesting and provocative Rhyme here, amply highlighted further by the posted picture. The "lean margin" and the "temptation" always go hand-in-hand in situations like you have described so well here. Excellent Work!! Cheers and Best, Gary
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Funom Makama
Date: 4/28/2018 8:56:00 AM
Thank you so much Gary... Your words are kind
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