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Break of Dawn

Birds warbling, at the break of dawn Wake me to the start of a new day Lively, cheerful, I am ready to be …. As much as I can, like what I hear In these early morning hours Just a beginning, a sunrise of hope A song, in the silence of everything that waits The next new experience, any given hour As I capture the mood that comes along With a willingness to seek out The best moments, in the value of time So I can rest later on, without regret Heidi Sands 7/14/18

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Date: 7/16/2018 10:22:00 AM
Best time of the day, and to read this Heidi, just made it even better.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 7/16/2018 10:43:00 AM
That is great to hear. Thank you Harry :)
Date: 7/16/2018 9:51:00 AM
I enjoy early morn with all the sounds of nature. It is good to know that you can hear them and enjoy them also. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara
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Heidi Sands
Date: 7/16/2018 10:43:00 AM
Thank you Sara. and you are welcome :)
Date: 7/15/2018 8:59:00 PM
This is so beautiful Heidi :)...I've had robins singing in my yard this summer...hatched two sets of babies under my laundry room window awning! Last one left today actually...so important to enjoy life's little moments :)
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Heidi Sands
Date: 7/16/2018 6:06:00 AM
That is so nice! And thank you :)
Date: 7/15/2018 1:55:00 PM
without regret, seeking the cheerful, that is such a spectacular thought. :)
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Heidi Sands
Date: 7/15/2018 2:01:00 PM
Thank you Casarah :)
Date: 7/15/2018 11:17:00 AM
Yes, I can empathize entirely. best time of the day, unused by most folk. Which means I get more to myself, teehee :). Fine write, Heidi. Viv x
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Heidi Sands
Date: 7/15/2018 2:01:00 PM
Enjoy Viv! Thank you :)
Date: 7/15/2018 10:12:00 AM
Hello Heidi, A beautifully-done and very uplifting free verse. The word picture you've captured with the "Break of Dawn" is nothing less than Superb!! Best Wishes, Gary
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Heidi Sands
Date: 7/15/2018 11:01:00 AM
Thank you Gary! I appreciate your comment :)
Date: 7/15/2018 6:24:00 AM
Heidi, there is no better time of day, when I was at work I used to get up at 04.00 and hear the birds morning choir and the sun just getting ready to rise. Tom
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Heidi Sands
Date: 7/15/2018 7:53:00 AM
Very nice Tom! Thank you :)
Date: 7/15/2018 4:36:00 AM
To be awaken by the day's morning song is a symphony of nature performed for our soul dearest, Heidi! Superb writing my friend!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 7/15/2018 7:52:00 AM
Thank you Demetrios :)
Date: 7/15/2018 2:04:00 AM
Another "sweet" write, Heidi. Very uplifting:)
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Heidi Sands
Date: 7/15/2018 7:52:00 AM
Thank you DT :)
Date: 7/14/2018 8:31:00 PM
A scenic and joyful look at the dawn..the day can only get brighter from here.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 7/15/2018 7:52:00 AM
Thank you Vijay :)
Date: 7/14/2018 6:33:00 PM
Awakening to sweet melodies, setting the mood for the day..
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Heidi Sands
Date: 7/14/2018 6:37:00 PM
Exactly Joseph. Thank you :)

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