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Break My Heart

Why do you feel the need to take my life way, saying bad things both day and night. Hurt me that way, talk to me with such disgust. Break my heart in two, like you always need to do. Date Written: 3/20/2020 Honorable Mention 5/20/2020 BRIAN'S CHOICE M, any form, any theme Contest Judged:5/20/2020 Sponsored by: Brian Strand

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Vijay Pandit

Date: 3/26/2020 11:39:00 AM

Well said Paula--I hear your message.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/26/2020 12:39:00 PM

Thank You, for your note. Glad you like it. Enjoy your day and be safe....................

Anil Deo

Date: 3/24/2020 1:32:00 AM

A concrete poem, showing your broken heart. Sis, you know Jesus mends even the broken-est heart. I know mine was, because of US green card gone all wrong (bad lawyer, Maqsood Mir), then marriage issues, when I least needed a divorce. I am back in my birth country, "married" to the mother of my daughters (now 30s). Until Jesus says, "Go." Stay safe during the COVID-19 test of Faith. You/we shall overcome - as Jesus did. shalom shalom Paula

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/26/2020 11:10:00 AM

Thank You, for reading and writing. Life is one huge test of ones life. Yes, You/we shall overcome - as Jesus did. Have a wonderful day...............

Sandra Adams

Date: 3/20/2020 3:49:00 PM

we will never understand why some people like to belittle others... perhaps it makes them feel better about themselves... good write Paula... hugs and blessings :)

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/20/2020 3:59:00 PM

Thank You, for your note. So are so right. Glad you like it. Hugs, Blessings and a great weekend...........

Arturo Michael

Date: 3/20/2020 11:18:00 AM

You can send this by post card to many people in life...a question I'm sure will not be answered directly... Good one

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/20/2020 11:25:00 AM

Thank You for writing. Glad you like it. You are so right when you said, "You can send this by post card to many people in life." Have a wonderful weekend.................