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May- 10- 2024

Palindrome Limerick Poetry Contest

Sponsor- Joseph May

At noon, Sam saw a masked man at his door Fear was in his eye, yet tried to ignore Trying to peep, heard- "I'm Death" "Have come to level your breath" Like a racecar, he ran. Rest is lore!

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/13/2024 4:09:00 AM

Good one. If we knew this would be our last day, we would probably try to run as well. Thanks for sharing this one with us and for dropping by my page. Sara K

Jan Allison

Date: 5/12/2024 11:56:00 AM

Great use of the palindromes Valsa, good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/11/2024 10:51:00 PM

Great job here. It seems like a difficult task to do this one

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 5/10/2024 3:37:00 PM

now you've totally impressed me with this creation! The perfect Palindrone Limerick and great contest contender! have a pleasant evening, dear Valsa. Hugs, Sara

Jay Narain

Date: 5/10/2024 10:05:00 AM

Great subtle limerick. Nice poem, Valsa ji.

Yann Rolland

Date: 5/10/2024 5:35:00 AM

wonderful imagination, and so subtle limerick, enjoyed yann

Tom Cunningham

Date: 5/10/2024 5:17:00 AM

You rose well to the challenge Valsa, best of luck in the contest and enjoy your weekend. Tom

Tom Woody

Date: 5/10/2024 5:07:00 AM

Good thing Sam still had some pep in his step. Nice lim Valsa

Buhagiar Victor

Date: 5/10/2024 3:35:00 AM

I love limericks even if I rarely write one. The muse abandoned me. Lovely used chosen names. Blessings.

Ink Empress

Date: 5/10/2024 12:06:00 AM

Great use of palindromes, so clever and creative! Another one of those takes that prove that you can do any form and any theme effortlessly dear valsa! I love the wors you chose too especially racecar. “ Trying to peep, heard- "I'm Death" "Have come to level your breath"” soul hitting! So powerful! And your rhymes too here stands out! Youv done an excellent take on this! Pleasure always reading your work. Best wishes for the contest. Sending you light always dead talented soul!