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May- 10- 2024
Palindrome Limerick Poetry Contest
Sponsor- Joseph May

Brave Sam

At noon, Sam saw a masked man at his door Fear was in his eye, yet tried to ignore Trying to peep, heard- "I'm Death" "Have come to level your breath" Like a racecar, he ran. Rest is lore!
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Dietrich Avatar
June 1, 2024 at 10:26 PM
S really cute one. Congrats
Woods Avatar
May 31, 2024 at 5:11 PM
Nice!! Scary Limerick!
May Avatar
May 31, 2024 at 5:05 AM
Congrats on your win Valsa, Very nicely penned
Maverick Avatar
May 21, 2024 at 3:27 PM
Well as a type of the man in question Valsa.? I could accuse you of being mask-ist.? And put you on my' hit list.?' But you did pretty Good anyway..So I'm out of a job there lol))) And have enjoyed the fun, hope you appreiciate My pun.? Anyway...Anyhow.?? How do I do this And still keep a straight mask.?? God only knows? And the pays not great..' It must be Love.? Any more of this and they'll think I'm a Softee.? Well I am ice cool.' All the best valsa.'
Kendrick Avatar
May 13, 2024 at 4:09 AM
Good one. If we knew this would be our last day, we would probably try to run as well. Thanks for sharing this one with us and for dropping by my page. Sara K
Allison Avatar
May 12, 2024 at 11:56 AM
Great use of the palindromes Valsa, good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
Dietrich Avatar
May 11, 2024 at 10:51 PM
Great job here. It seems like a difficult task to do this one
Narain Avatar
May 10, 2024 at 10:05 AM
Great subtle limerick. Nice poem, Valsa ji.
Rolland Avatar
May 10, 2024 at 5:35 AM
wonderful imagination, and so subtle limerick, enjoyed yann
Cunningham Avatar
May 10, 2024 at 5:17 AM
You rose well to the challenge Valsa, best of luck in the contest and enjoy your weekend. Tom
Buhagiar Avatar
May 10, 2024 at 3:35 AM
I love limericks even if I rarely write one. The muse abandoned me. Lovely used chosen names. Blessings.
Empress Avatar
May 10, 2024 at 12:06 AM
Great use of palindromes, so clever and creative! Another one of those takes that prove that you can do any form and any theme effortlessly dear valsa! I love the wors you chose too especially racecar. “ Trying to peep, heard- "I'm Death" "Have come to level your breath"” soul hitting! So powerful! And your rhymes too here stands out! Youv done an excellent take on this! Pleasure always reading your work. Best wishes for the contest. Sending you light always dead talented soul!
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