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Braless

Each morning when I take my walk, I see a sight which makes me gawk – A woman, in her seventies, Whose breasts are swinging in the breeze. Well, not exactly – there’s a blouse, So there’s no cause to fret or grouse; But there’s no bra – of that I’m sure, And no elastic to endure. She looks like she’s en route to work; Perhaps the dress code is a perk. Nobody even gives a glance To see the way those puppies dance! I wonder why she sports this style. Would asking earn a frown or smile? My theory holds, in protests past, Into the fire her bras were cast. Though that was many years ago, She must have liked the feel and flow Of being free and less confined And thus, her bras remained behind. A simple explanation – still, I do not know and never will. No matter whence her reasons stem, Hats off to this unfettered femme!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 9/9/2012 10:43:00 AM
long may she sway! well done. Lee
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Date: 8/31/2012 8:43:00 AM
hahaha, I love that line: unfettered femme. You SPARKLE with poems like this!!!
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Date: 8/30/2012 4:10:00 PM
Got a chuckle..Great topic about which to pen lines.Goes to prove that a poem can be composed about anything..Thanks for stopping by..Your comment was uplifting..Sara
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Date: 8/30/2012 2:17:00 PM
LOL, I had a good chuckle picturing this lady, Ilene
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Date: 8/30/2012 12:34:00 PM
Simply BRILLIANT my dear! This will keep me laughing for days. Thanks for the smiles you've brought our way! Terry
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Date: 8/30/2012 11:29:00 AM
What an enjoyable funny read! Great topic! Wish I had your neighbors!! LOL
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Date: 8/30/2012 10:50:00 AM
She must want complete freedom. Nice write again, Ilene.
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Date: 8/30/2012 10:28:00 AM
ilene, who would ever think to write a poem like this, you did, and boy i enjoyed this.
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Date: 8/30/2012 10:18:00 AM
I had to smile at this one. I will have to keep my eyes open when I take my morning walks. RW
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Date: 8/30/2012 10:07:00 AM
Going braless at 20 is one thing..after 50 its another story..but, good for her. Enjoyed your poem. BG
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Date: 8/30/2012 9:53:00 AM
there you go, girl.. at 70, why the restriction... clap, clap, ilene!.. a fav, and fab!..:) huggs!
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Date: 8/30/2012 9:25:00 AM
This poem is quite funny and i love your rhythemic patterns.
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