Boxed Up

boxed up chocolate sweet and sad
ready to be sniffed and pinched, it’s bad
in the lovely shape of a heart, heartless
and ravishing, ruby red incalculable —
ashes do not lust nor hunger
nor does the adjoining sweet-
heart wish to taste another delicious morsel
instead
plops olives into his nightcap
in the early morning hours
of deeply departed reticence

he remembers hugging
his heart pillow
readying himself
for their precious years
as she rolled up his
compression socks

he held her heart
until it stopped

2/12/2022

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Date: 2/17/2022 1:44:00 PM
Ahhh Sheryl beautiful.
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Date: 2/15/2022 11:35:00 AM
Beautifully sad.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/15/2022 7:32:00 PM
Thank you, Gary!
Date: 2/13/2022 8:49:00 AM
True love...I'm so sad...beautiful Kim!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/13/2022 10:51:00 AM
Thank you ~ hugs
Date: 2/13/2022 8:49:00 AM
This is so sad. It is so difficult to go on without your mate when you’ve been together so many years, there is always that feeling of emptiness. Valentine’s Day is bittersweet. Grandchildren help. Blessings xxoo
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/13/2022 10:52:00 AM
Sometimes they help. My dad’s kids are the greatest comfort to him…just spending time listening, bringing a meal.
Date: 2/13/2022 3:11:00 AM
"he held her heart until it stopped" Wow! What an image. Great writing. I have held many a heart, long after it stopped beating for me. One I have never forgotten, for mine stopped also with her sad and tragic accident. Powerful poetry! Masterful poetry!
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Joe Dimino
Date: 2/13/2022 11:03:00 AM
Deep love lost...is where the poet died. And then his life is all a dream. A write of poetry and spirituality. Don't feel sad. That is what poetry is all about, living words manifest. Your poem worked perfectly, touching the mind and soul of another. Blessings my friend! Great writing, dearly appreciated.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/13/2022 6:15:00 AM
Sending you a hug, Joe. A sad story. Seeing my Dad after my mom died…oh how he loved her <3
Date: 2/13/2022 1:59:00 AM
sadly realistic, gr8 free verse <3
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/13/2022 6:14:00 AM
Thank you! All too true - with my dad in mind.
Date: 2/13/2022 1:35:00 AM
The fate of man. Hugs.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/13/2022 6:13:00 AM
It is but love is still God’s great gift…to give of himself. Be blessed, dear one!
Date: 2/12/2022 10:23:00 PM
Tragic ending, but the love was easily felt. Thanks for sharing your poetry with us, Kim. Smiles ~ Blessing, Bill
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/13/2022 6:13:00 AM
Sharing a smile with you. Thank you, Bill!
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