Born Into Bondage

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Conditioned to believe in this or that Caste, colour and creed determines response Narrow views and specious logic fall flat Before the monk, who joy pulse does ensconce In all honesty, have we felt within Ignition renewal continual As bliss bubbles thus burst upon our skin Viewing each life breath as God’s miracle Do we reside in thought rested silence Awareness self-aware equanimous Are we in resonance with innocence Throbbing of bliss current continuous Save choosing cessation there is no way As long as we look outwards, heart will sway 24-November-2021

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 11/24/2021 11:03:00 PM

Gorgeous pen "In all honesty, have we felt within Ignition renewal continual As bliss bubbles thus burst upon our skin Viewing each life breath as God’s miracle"

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 11/25/2021 12:02:00 AM

I gave up visiting temples, mosques and churches, since if we do not feel the energy deep in our bones, it’s not real .. merely amplified thought or what we call faith. Still, many cannot be honest with themselves and so focus on religious doctrines … no harm, maybe it is helpful to them

Bill Baker

Date: 11/24/2021 7:07:00 AM

Only through the inward journey can the Love flow out. Great sonnet Seeker. Nice rhyme and flow, Bill

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 11/24/2021 7:25:00 AM

Thanks Bill! Your words are encouraging