Born In Orange Light

Born in orange light, A street bum's box kittens crept, Blinking and licking.

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Elaine George

Date: 8/2/2011 4:32:00 AM

Superb writing Matt. Congratulations on making it through the first round and best wishes on making it to the Finals. Lainie

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/28/2011 4:09:00 PM

Ahh, what an image of these dear little kitties.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/23/2011 3:59:00 PM

Can see the scene..At least he had something..Sara

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 1/23/2011 3:16:00 PM

Your picture of kittens is right on..a new look at the homeless. BG

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 1/23/2011 1:21:00 PM

I do not usually like haikus, but this one is lovely...

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/23/2011 11:55:00 AM

aweee,, enjoyed your haiku,..p.d.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 1/23/2011 11:25:00 AM

superb piece that glows with such well-chosen words!! love this, matt!! :) hugggs, nette

Steven Henderson

Date: 1/23/2011 11:21:00 AM

Very nice. Thank you for sharing. Steve