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Book of Colour

Imagine your life as a colouring in book Inside this magical book You can follow your own journey discover your true destiny using your lovely pencils You can join yourself on each page and as you set out to explore the world you will find out how much adventure there is outside of your tower So bring a little bit of colour into your new world Include your friends and family to enjoy the adventure on this page of mystical rides and be taken to a place where dreams are made

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Beata Agustin

Date: 3/3/2024 11:40:00 PM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

D.A Hopkins

Date: 10/29/2016 2:54:00 AM

As you know I am Teena’s mum so 7 was a must for your time and 1st poem published. I am very interested in the future of the Australian poet and I will see a lifetime of memories of my little girl in black and white to treasure always.

Moon Flower

Date: 9/27/2016 3:18:00 AM

That's the way to go! Congrats on your first entry and welcome to Poetry Soup, Payteena. :)

Skat A

Date: 9/26/2016 3:09:00 PM

Payteena, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/22/2016 12:53:00 PM

Payteena, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Cyndi Macmillan

Date: 9/21/2016 11:07:00 PM

Welcome to Soup, Payteena. I like the idea of "You can join yourself." Cool concept. Hope you enjoy your membership and (as your 'mum' said below) that you continue to nurture your art and explore poetry. Cheers.

D.A Hopkins

Date: 9/21/2016 9:37:00 PM

I am going to have to say that I am so proud of you. I am very happy with your desired to follow me (mum) with the world of poetry. I am going to be interested in hearing what you become over time with the help of other poets.