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In October, I feel a nip in the air, that frosts my breath like contrails of smoke; as gilded leaves start falling from the trees. Overhead, a gaggle of honking geese are fleeing Winter's approach; joining the songbirds that have migrated south. The leaves are painted in thick, bold strokes of yellow, scarlet, fuchsia, gold and orange; inked by Jack Frost, and sprinkled on the ground like confetti. Amber and vermilion drip from the trees; pooling into a crunchy sea of colorful leaves that the wind weaves, into shifting swirls of abstract art. One of Nature's boldest paintings, Autumn steals one's breath away, instilling awe; infusing Summer's death with Winter's birth, it is a magical transformation to behold.

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Date: 11/14/2024 6:53:00 PM
Wowzers the imagery there is vivid and colorful!
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Date: 11/15/2024 6:52:00 AM
Thanks, Miranda; I appreciate your comments, my friend. Emile.
Date: 11/6/2024 5:39:00 PM
Imagery and description is wonderful! Xo
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Date: 11/6/2024 7:49:00 PM
Thanks, Crystol; as always, I welcome and appreciate your comments, my friend. Emile.
Date: 11/1/2024 5:48:00 AM
This is a lovely poem. It ends with a catchy punch. Well done, Emile.
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Date: 11/1/2024 7:44:00 AM
Thanks, Emate; I appreciate your comments, my friend. Emile.
Date: 10/25/2024 2:41:00 PM
I see your delightful work on the winners' list. I am so happy for you that it is there. Way to go. Congratulations. Sara
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Date: 10/26/2024 8:14:00 AM
Thanks, Sara; I appreciate your comments, my friend. Emile.
Date: 10/25/2024 9:53:00 AM
Gorgeous imagery Emile. The boldness of color, the crunch underfoot. Magic, indeed! Congratulations! :)
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Date: 10/26/2024 8:14:00 AM
Thanks, Linda; I appreciate your comments, my friend. Emile.

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