Body Language

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We each have a unique identity Alteration is hopeless The enigma is a conundrum With the option of reshuffling You cannot fight a fire through an amazing sight to behold In a completely emotional manner Often, I would just stroll across vast deserts Simply stay away from you Yes, I will not have it any other way I hope my eyes express all I can't say Written: November 17, 2022

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Bill Baker

Date: 11/18/2022 4:42:00 PM

Sometimes it seems impossible to say for our emotions are going through, and it's painful to be misunderstood by others. A deep poem with layer of your thoughts. Thanks for sharing, Lasaad. I enjoy reading your poetry my dear friend. Thanks for reading and commenting on mine. Bill

Vijay Pandit

Date: 11/18/2022 5:06:00 AM

You are right my friend. Body language speaks louder than words.

Deb M

Date: 11/17/2022 11:40:00 PM

Lovely poem Lasaad …i like the last line especially! Im sure your eyes do or did express the truth! Enjoyed…Debx

Valsa George

Date: 11/17/2022 7:55:00 PM

Each one has a unique identity....! Quite true and our eyes can tell all that we can't say, as our eyes are the windows of the soul ! A great truth and a meaningful poem