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Boat Full of Dreams

a boat full of dreams sailing towards you at night gliding happily only the stars are privy to our love making fenced in by blue sea we are cradled soft arousing towards the shore released by beauty the sailing blue moon is bathing us in her blue I love you more than yesterday less than tomorrow and half of what I will be a boat full of dreams sailing, sailing in the night gliding, gliding free.... a senryu for you

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Date: 9/25/2023 8:27:00 PM
"the sailing blue moon is bathing us in her blue I love you" My goshhh, reading your poems is like enveloping one's soul in soft cadence of stars and galaxies.. Just amazing.. I love so many lines here, your wordplay is exquisite and eloquent, perfectly painting a dreamscape.. "more than yesterday less than tomorrow and half of what I will be" This line has so much depth.. Brilliantly written dear Rose, sending love n hugs :)
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Date: 9/25/2023 4:18:00 PM
A lovely romantic series of Senyrus. I especially like the 'sailing blue moon.' Nicely done!
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Date: 9/25/2023 2:01:00 AM
This is so lovely and serene. The imagery is romantic and very intimate. Love this well crafted poem Mystic Rose Rose!
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Date: 9/24/2023 12:25:00 PM
God Bless you and Aldo Vie!
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Date: 9/24/2023 5:17:00 AM
Dream--dream, my friend.
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Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 9/24/2023 9:56:00 AM
I do, I do, every chance I get Vijay :)
Date: 9/24/2023 5:13:00 AM
Love is freedom! It is what God gave us, and the devil despises most. Great read!
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Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 9/24/2023 9:55:00 AM
glad you enjoyed my boat of dreams dear Joe :)

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