Emile Pinet Poet Ottava rima

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Blustery Breezes

Blustery breezes rustle the changing leaves:
as Nature braces for Winter's arrival.
And a shower of colors falls from the trees:
in homage to Spring, Autumn's closest rival.
Scurrying squirrels stash stolen nuts like thieves:
acorns are essential for their survival.
And alas, Summer's songbirds are all but gone,
along with the dewdrops that once graced my lawn.

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Andrea Dietrich May 26, 2024 at 12:07 PM Looking over your example here. Perfection! Emile Pinet May 27, 2024 at 8:45 AM Thanks, Andrea; I appreciate your comments, my friend; enjoy your day, Emile.

Sara Kendrick October 3, 2022 at 1:10 PM Great fall rhymes!! Congratulations on this winner. Way go to. Sara Emile Pinet October 3, 2022 at 4:22 PM Thanks, Sara, I appreciate your comments, my friend, enjoy your day, Emile.

Linda Alice Fowler October 3, 2022 at 7:22 AM I really like this friend Emile. The alliteration is subtly present and the imagery and allegory tastefully done. Congratulations on your win! Linda Emile Pinet October 3, 2022 at 8:19 AM Thanks, Linda, I appreciate your comments, my friend, have a great day, Emile.

Beata Agustin October 3, 2022 at 5:18 AM Wow! Thanks for sharing this... making me delight with the wonders of four seasons. God bless you. Emile Pinet October 3, 2022 at 8:18 AM Thanks, Beata, I appreciate your comments, my friend, God bless, Emile.

Susan Ashley October 2, 2022 at 5:41 PM Dear Emile, the transitional lively beauty of Fall is captured with elegance and finesse in your superb poem. I especially love; “squirrels stash stolen nuts like thieves” (so vibrant!) and the lovely sprinklings of alliteration gracing your verses. Congratulations for your excellent win in Milt’s contest. Warmest wishes, my friend.. ~Susan Emile Pinet October 3, 2022 at 8:17 AM Thanks, Susan, your comments have brought a smile to my day, my friend, Emile.

Jenna Logan October 2, 2022 at 4:33 PM Congratulations on your winning lines, Emile. Emile Pinet October 3, 2022 at 8:16 AM Thanks, Jenna, I appreciate it my friend, Emile.

Janice Canerdy October 2, 2022 at 11:21 AM Emile, a huge CONGRATS on your well-deserved win! Janice Emile Pinet October 2, 2022 at 1:15 PM Thanks, Janice, I appreciate it my friend, Emile.

L Milton Hankins October 2, 2022 at 10:18 AM CONGRATULATIONS, Emile, on your splendid, well-written Ottava Rima. I'm so happy it rose to this level on the podium. It is so appropriate, too, for this time of the year! Emile Pinet October 2, 2022 at 1:14 PM Thanks, Milt, I appreciate the placement my friend, Emile.

Anna Hopper September 11, 2022 at 2:08 PM This is lovely! Emile Pinet September 11, 2022 at 3:13 PM Thanks, Anna, I appreciate it my friend, Emile.