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Blustery Breezes

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Blustery breezes rustle the changing leaves, as nature braces for Winter's arrival. A shower of color falls from Autumn trees as a homage to Spring, Fall's closest rival. Scurrying squirrels stash stores of nuts like thieves; acorns are essential for their survival. Alas, Summer's sweet songbirds are all but gone, along with the dewdrops that once graced my lawn.

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/26/2024 12:07:00 PM

Looking over your example here. Perfection!

Emile Pinet
Date: 5/27/2024 8:45:00 AM

Thanks, Andrea; I appreciate your comments, my friend; enjoy your day, Emile.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/3/2022 1:10:00 PM

Great fall rhymes!! Congratulations on this winner. Way go to. Sara

Emile Pinet
Date: 10/3/2022 4:22:00 PM

Thanks, Sara, I appreciate your comments, my friend, enjoy your day, Emile.

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 10/3/2022 7:22:00 AM

I really like this friend Emile. The alliteration is subtly present and the imagery and allegory tastefully done. Congratulations on your win! Linda

Emile Pinet
Date: 10/3/2022 8:19:00 AM

Thanks, Linda, I appreciate your comments, my friend, have a great day, Emile.

Beata Agustin

Date: 10/3/2022 5:18:00 AM

Wow! Thanks for sharing this... making me delight with the wonders of four seasons. God bless you.

Emile Pinet
Date: 10/3/2022 8:18:00 AM

Thanks, Beata, I appreciate your comments, my friend, God bless, Emile.

Susan Ashley

Date: 10/2/2022 5:41:00 PM

Dear Emile, the transitional lively beauty of Fall is captured with elegance and finesse in your superb poem. I especially love; “squirrels stash stolen nuts like thieves” (so vibrant!) and the lovely sprinklings of alliteration gracing your verses. Congratulations for your excellent win in Milt’s contest. Warmest wishes, my friend.. ~Susan

Emile Pinet
Date: 10/3/2022 8:17:00 AM

Thanks, Susan, your comments have brought a smile to my day, my friend, Emile.

Jenna Logan

Date: 10/2/2022 4:33:00 PM

Congratulations on your winning lines, Emile.

Emile Pinet
Date: 10/3/2022 8:16:00 AM

Thanks, Jenna, I appreciate it my friend, Emile.

Janice Canerdy

Date: 10/2/2022 11:21:00 AM

Emile, a huge CONGRATS on your well-deserved win! Janice

Emile Pinet
Date: 10/2/2022 1:15:00 PM

Thanks, Janice, I appreciate it my friend, Emile.

L Milton Hankins

Date: 10/2/2022 10:18:00 AM

CONGRATULATIONS, Emile, on your splendid, well-written Ottava Rima. I'm so happy it rose to this level on the podium. It is so appropriate, too, for this time of the year!

Emile Pinet
Date: 10/2/2022 1:14:00 PM

Thanks, Milt, I appreciate the placement my friend, Emile.

Anna Hopper

Date: 9/11/2022 2:08:00 PM

This is lovely!

Emile Pinet
Date: 9/11/2022 3:13:00 PM

Thanks, Anna, I appreciate it my friend, Emile.